The Knight’s Castle

November 29, 2017


by Aiden.


Once upon a time there was gigantic thunderstorm and a knight came to save people.

A scary, dangerous ghost with dangerous powers appeared in the King’s castle. It started a fire in the castle.

The knight saw smoke coming from the king’s castle. The knight ran to the king’s castle…..

To be continued.

Lego Ninjago

November 29, 2017


by Josh.

Lego Ninjago.

The Great Devourer consumed an entire town. The Ninja Jayzx and Kaizkzanzx.

Then a titanium dragon came breathing ice. Then Zane got his ice neck.

To be continued……………



November 28, 2017


by Robbie.

Last year I went 170 mph down the motorway in a GTR.

I was doing a drift round the roundabout.

My friend Josh and I went to McDonald’s. I had a plain cheese burger and Josh had a Big Mac.

Josh and I made a ram car and we went making other cars fly. Someone else came along and tried to ram us.

Then we saw one of my friends. He was driving a R8.

We went to buy Josh a new car. It was a Lambarghini. Then we went to a monastery and made some noise. Then we went to park our cars.


The New Car

November 28, 2017


by Aiden.

Gordon liked a car. He gave £1000 to the shop manager.

He was driving it. Gordon had a crash.

It got fixed.

Climbing at Ratho

November 27, 2017


by Alexander

We went on Friday indoor climbing.

I went high up and all went high up.

We had a harness.

It was fun when I flew down from the rope.

We were there for 4 and a half hours.

We had fun.

Who was there with us – Josh, Jack, Robbie, Tehya, Aiden .


May 3, 2017


jack  2 5 17

I went to afrca  to see anamols

There was lions hippo graffes zebas rino  and   fish and the badits afrca hunters and the dam full of water and the anamols havent got any water and we have to take the dam and the anamols have water and so i and the anmolos lived happly ever after



Jamie and Jay quadriding

May 3, 2017


Robbie 02.05.17

Once upon a time there was a boy called Jamie. He went to ride his quad. Instead, he fell off it.

He sold it and he got a motorbike. He went riding on it on the track He got really good at it. He went to someone called Jay. Jay and Jamie went to ride the motorbike at the track. Then Jay started riding it and Jamie told him, “This is how you do it”.

And then Jay went to get his motorbike.He started riding the motorbike on the track. He did some of the stunts. And he said “I’m better off with the quad”, and he sold his motorbike to get the quad. And then he went to the quad shop in Falkirk to get it. He said to his mum:”I’ve got a new quad bike. It goes really, really fast. Did you pick up the trailer?”

“No,” she said.”I’ll go and buy a trailer”.

Story of Undertale

May 3, 2017


jayden 02/05/2017

story of undertale

Sans was selling hot dogs. Paparas started frayin the onons. Toriel asked for a hot dog.  Sans said one hot dog coming up.She sed it was the best hot dog she ever tasted. 1ower leter sans said to chara slised his hot dog in hafe sans sweted they sate down   and had a cup of tea the and donuts a strang man came in he said hahahahahHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHahhhahahahahaahhahahahahahahhahahahhhah

he fanted and died

the end

Jamie and Star Wars

May 3, 2017


Harris                              02.05.17

Once upon a time there was a boy called Jamie and then when he was sleeping he heard a boom.Then he opened his window and then there was a space ship.Then Darvader and then there was a another ship and it was Lukestarwalker came out.Then they started a battle and then when they got Jamie Darvader went back to the dark side.Then the stormtroopers killed some of the good guys and then Han solo came out of nowear with his peeow peeow gun.Then Darvader hit Chewbacka and then they had to get away from republic and then they got away from them and then Chewy died.

The end.

Jack and the Hotel

April 28, 2017


by Jack.

Dreamworks animation and walt Disney picturs prenst a Pixar animation studos film.

Once upon a time there was a boy called jack. He was going to a hotel in the country.

I saw the wedding the bride and groom called Lucy and oOver and the bride and groom told me about the bad guy tent. The man was called boler head guy. Ater the brand and groom levt and jack went to a hotel room were go to a restunt and a swimming  pool and a funfair.

And at night the bride and groom was captured by bloer head guy and I trid to defeat him and to save them and so I leve the hotel and I say goodbuy to braid and groom and I got back to my own house and so I lived happly ever after.

The end



Clash of Rome

April 28, 2017


by Harris

Once upon a time there was a team of romans then when the romans went to the house and then when he went to the secret temple.Then when they got there one of the romans found the secret sword of the secret lion and its gold and it is as hard as metal and then when they got back to the city and then when they got back then they greeks tane his master then when they killed the master the roman sun went on a rampage and then all of the greeks where dead and then they had to find a new house and then they found a temple of light and then they lived there.   To be continued.

Part two.  then when they got to the temple of light and after they found the temple of life and love and they put the master on the plate of life and then he was brough back to life and everyone was happy again then out of nowhere a fire ball came flying in and its was a greek beast and then the skeleton army came out of the ground and they had 1000 skelitons and there was 5000 romans and then the romans went back hame to his master and then they tane the army base and then the army came from the sky and then when they landed the army helped the romans and then there were 5500 and then the greeks came with 10.000 men and then only the romans master was left the end.

by Harris

Clash of Rome

April 28, 2017


by Jayden.

Once upon a time there lived a young Roman who loved to cook with his Gran.

But when he was only 13 years old the Romans attacked his city.  Archers were firing and he hid behind a building. The Romans ran and looked for him but they could not see him. He threw a stone at them and he went to the Temple of Destiny to get the sword of destiny which was a golden sword. He charged towards the Romans and he jumped off the roof and sliced the Roman in the head.

He wasn’t finished baking with his Gran which had made him angry.  He ran towards the one who had all the armour with a shield and a mace – he stabbed him through the armour and he went down with a bang.  The archer shot at him, the arrow hit him in the leg! He was weak, he flung his sword at the archer. He pulled the sharp arrow out of his leg. It made him feel drowsy.

He woke up the next day – a wolf had taken him to his den.  He got up, he rode the wolf to Rome.

To be continued…..


When he got to the door of the other Romans, he got his golden sword and he broke down the gate. One of  the Roman soldiers spotted him and rode towards him. There was a massive clash. He swung his sword up but the Roman put his spear up to dodge his attack. The Roman did a jab but the other Roman knocked the spear out his hand. He ran towards that Roman and stabbed him in the heart. He pulled the sword out.

He saw his gran in the cage. His sword sliced through it. He let everyone go. But the Romans saw the body and released the demon. The demon was red like lava. He had claws sharper than spears. His teeth were as sharp as needles. He had a drill hand. The monster charged towards him and roared, The roar pushed the young Roman back. The Roman flung his sword but the monster smacked it out the way. He went to smack him. He rolled over. He ran towards his sword. the monster turned around. He picked up his sword. He ran towards the monster but the monster blocked his sword swing. The monster flung a lava ball, He flung his sword and it stuck in the beast’s hand.The beast pulled it out. The beast charged towards him. He put his sword out. The beast was slain.

Him and his gran walked home but a skeleton warrior sprang up. A witch had summoned him from the dead. His gran was going to run but he had two weapons.He said:”I have enough for two”. He flung his sword at the witch. The witch died. The skeleton punched him on the stomach and pulled out a hammer.He went to smack but the boy moved out the way. The boy stood up. They had an epic battle.The boy won because of his magical sword. Suddenly he heard a big bang. A giant was walking through the forest. The giant says:”What do you think you are doing in my forest?”

He flung a tree at the young Roman but the Roman sword was so sharp it sliced through the tree wood. He flung the sword at the giant. It stuck in the giant’s head. The giant pulled it out and the Roman ducked. The Roman flung a big was hammer at the giant’s head. The giant fell down. It died.

His gran was hungry>. He only had a sandwich. He cut it in half. He gave his gran some.They went on their journey. Suddenly a greedy pirate popped up. He said: “Give me all your gold!” The Roman said “No”. He pushed the greedy pirate off the bdge.They found their house. He went and ope3ned the door.They started cooking. His gran made a potion of healing. He dank it. He felt better, They lived happily ever after.

The End.

The White Lady of Kinneil

February 23, 2017


by Jack.

Once upon a time in Kinneil House, a young girl named Lady Alice, where she lived or something like that. But she was white, pretty and young.

But then, one day, a young man came (and often) and wanted to marry her and run away. But she didn’t like that and she ran away. And the man her father caught her and put her back in the room. And when she stayed in her room for hours, she stuck away with him, her boyfriend that she loved. But he tried to make a plan, but it was not good for she was seen.  And there was nothing in her heart.

And when the horse moved to the front, she was died. Died on the rocks and rolled down the hill. And all there she lay. And the old man was not here, at the tree. And the old lady kept staying there forever at the dead rocks. And then they  believed she will die.

The ghost she had, was truly a ghost. If she could only learn to love another. Then someone could find the boyfriend and bring him back to Lady Lilbourne and the spell would be broken. If not, she would be doomed to remain a ghost for all time.

As the years passed, she fell to despair and lost all hope, for who could ever learn to find a ghost.

The Wicked Stepmother and dad

February 9, 2016


by Tammie

once a upon atime there was a princess and was Abby and she had a sistar collde emma and they love to play wife their pets. and abby had a dog and emma had a cat and wen the mum and dad died

and wen thay. died they had a stap mum and dad and thay wor eval so thay wor so sad and thay got cpchar in the dungin so thay sat for hap but it didn’t work ont so the dog and the cat a thak the mum and dad so I brok out and me so wee left

the howes and they ran a way for evar

the end

Twin Towers

December 10, 2015


By Kieran

one day there was a man he is going to his work and his work is in the twin towers as a security man his office is at the very top but one day he was looking out of the window but he saw two airplanes coming towards him but before he phoned the police ambulance and firemen after he went to get everyone out

The story about Car buddies.

November 9, 2015


by Kian

One day Me and big Malcolm We wat to burger king
Me and big Malcolm got free chip and we wat to the car to go home
Wat I got home
And I wat to bed

the end