Deanburn Enhanced Provision

by Dylan N

Once upon a time there was a king called Marvin. He had lots of gold and  coins and a gold crown. He was very lucky.

That night he went to bed. A loud noise came from down the stairs. Marvin went to look. He turned on the light then he saw a robber stealing his gold.
“Come back with my gold!” he said.

Marvin ran after him. The robber ran out of the castle. King Marvin got on a horse and chased after the robber. Marvin ran faster and grabbed the robber.
“ NOOOOO!” said the robber.

Marvin sat in his castle in front of his gold. He was happy and glad.

The end

by Dean 

Hi, my name is Dean. I went to the fair and me and my dad and my mum and my 2 brothers went on a ferris wheel and I went on the bumpiest ride in the fair. And my dad went on the scariest ride but my mum was not brave at all. Then I saw my nana and I said, “Hi Nana!” But she didn’t see me and my mum told her where I was.

 I heard a strange noise. It was someone getting married in the church. Then we went to the Falkirk wheel. It was very fun. But my mum was in a mood. She was not very happy. I was laughing because I was climbing on the slide and I said, “Hi mum!” Then she looked up. She was very scared that I wouldn’t fall. But I was very close. I didn’t fall or I would have broke my back

by Marc

Yesterday we want to Crucial Crew. It was good.

I like it when the fire guy telled us to watch a DVD but he went outside. He said he would be back in a minute and he went outside and he switched on a smoke machine and smoke came out and we were meant to go out. But we never. He had to come and get us out and we went out.

He asked us what we would of done. I said I would have phoned the fire brigade. And the phone was in a toilet and there were no toilet. Then I phoned the firebrigade. Then he asked me what I want – fire, police or ambulance – and I asked for fire brigade.

by Ace

 We had to do a warm up, press-ups and forward rolls and backward rolls. We were fighting for the Scottish team. Our teacher Jane, she was fighting for the Scottish team as well.

Our club is called Deanburn Judo Club. We meet at 10 am on Saturdays. There are 27 people in the club. I was up against 12 year olds and older people. I was happy when I got my trophy. I was happy when I got my medal for going up at the opening that was when the big people were fighting and I had a sore back after that day.

I was fighting and I fighted loads of people in the competition. My mum and dad said, “I am proud of you”.

by Scott & Dylan

Me and Scott went down to Miss Hilditch’s class and on the way in I was shy. And then I took a picture of Scott and Miss Hilditch and the plant. Then me and Scott went back up to Mr Antolak  and then he had to change the batteries. I was upset because I made a video instead of a picture.

The classroom looked like a rainforest to me. They had butterflies and a little toy parrot and a bird. There were some bushes and some flowers. They had a picture of a tree. They had a large tree and a little bush. It was a drawing of a bush. I was pleased with it.  It was good.

Me and Dylan went to Mrs Hilditch we asked her what the jungle is used for.
“It’s for our rainforest”.
“How did you make the forest?”
“I got the bird and butterfly from the charity ball”.

We asked her if she wants her picture taken. She said yes. We got Mr Antolak’s camera and Dylan took a picture of Mrs Hilditch and me. The classroom looked like a jungle.

by Jonathan M

Hello this is Jonathan m with a story about WW3. This is made up.

Once upon a time ago in 2015 there was a boy called Jonathan who joined the British army. Jonathan was 16 years old. His mum said, ”Don’t join the army. You will die in Afghanistan”.
Jonathan said, “No I’m not going to die”.

So Jonathan went in the boat going to Afghanistan. It took 1 day to get to Afghanistan. Jonathan was a little bit scared in the boat about what his mum said. Then he got out and meet the another soldiers who got the helicopter on the sand. Jonathan’s commander said, “We need to get past that wall”.
Jonathan said, “ I have a idea”.

Jonathan’s idea was to shoot the tank at the wall so the afghan soldiers will come out. Then the British will shoot at them when they got out the big wall gate. Jonathan’s commander said, “That is a good idea”.

His commander’s name was commander David M. That was Jonathan’s brother who joined 4 years ago. Jonathan and David always helped each other if one of us got injured. We will stick beside each other in till the medical came.

Then commander David said, Get the tank ready to shoot at the wall”. Then Marc was in the tank. He shot the tank bullet and Darren said, “Fire the bullet!” and Marc fired it at the wall. The Afghan soldiers got out of  the brick gate and ran out and we shot at them. Marc shot a tank bullet at them but they where running out very fast. But the Afghan soldiers all died. Then commander David said, “Lets go in”. Jonathan ran in first, then Marc and Darren brung in the tank. Then commander David came in with the rest of the soldiers.

Jonathan and David was walking down the path and they got ambushed. If Marc and Darren was not there we would have been killed.  Jonathan, Marc and Darren were new in the British army but Jonathan stayed next to David.

Then Jonathan seen water. David says, “Don’t drink it. It has been poisoned”, because David seen the green bits inside. Then Jonathan and David and the rest of the soldiers ran down the path shooting round the corners and we killed about 8 hundred Afghan soldiers. And Jonathan seen a tank coming and Marc and Darren were shooting at it and they missed so all of the soldiers hid but Jonathan. David grabbed a bazooka and shot at it and it blowed up so the soldiers went down to the tank with Jonathan and David.

The British soldiers checked if any soldiers were alive. Jonathan seen a bit of movement so Jonathan went to see and found a baby in front of a fire. Her parents died so Jonathan put her in beside Adam the plane driver. Adam took her back to Britain.

Then Jonathan and David got a move on. They got out of the village and in to the sandy forest. Then Jonathan said to David, “Something is fishy,” and David said that too. Then they heard a noise coming from up the trees and he seen the British parachuters and some of them got shot down. Jonathan and David seen the Afghan soldiers running up shooting. Then the British tank came down and blowed up the Afghan soldiers up who were running up to them.  Jonathan said, “We are lucky”. David said, “Yes we are lucky our tank came up and saved us or we would of been dog meat”.

Then Jonathan and David and the soldiers got out of the forest and got to the water where the boats were and they got on the boats and got back to Britain alive.

Jonathan and David’s mum was not sad because we were not dead. Jonathan and David was in the newspaper the time they got back. It was 2016. The day –  Tuesday 15 march 2016. It took a year to get through Afghanistan.

That is the end of my story. Thank you for reading.

by Dylan N

Dylan went to Loch Ness on the trip to see the loch. When he was standing near the loch he heard a roaring noise. When he turned round and saw the Loch Ness monster he couldn’t believe his eyes. “Yorks”, he said.

Scott and Dean ran towards Dylan. What is it?” said Dean     
“Look!” whispered Dylan pointing at the head popping out of the water. They ran back to there group.When they ran back to the group they spoke to Mr Antolak.
“Mr Antolak! Dylan saw the monster out in the loch”, said Scott.

They ran back to the standing bit. Mr Antolak followed.
”That’s funny. It was right here a minute ago after we walked away”.

They walked over to the side of the loch and walked down the path to find it. On the way, Daniel zoomed past Mr Antolak and started pushing Dylan.
 “Don’t push me “, said Dylan.
Daniel began to attack Dylan. He was like a dragon stamping on a person.
“Aaaw!” said Dylan. “Mr Antolak! Daniel stood on my foot!”
“Don’t be rude”, said Mr Antolak.

When Dylan kept walking, he heard the loud roaring sound again. Scott and Dean followed Dylan to the loch. Dylan ran down the path to near the edge of the loch and found the perfect spot. Daniel ran down the path and jumped by Dylan’s space. Daniel pushed him. Dylan was throwing some bread into the water to feed the ducks. Daniel pushed Dylan out of his space. Daniel pushed him again. Dylan pushed him back: “Don’t push me!”

Daniel wobbled. Dylan wobbled. Splash! Dylan tumbled into Loch Ness. Crash! Daniel tumbled into Loch Ness.
Mr Antolak helped Daniel out..
“Help” screamed Dylan N in the water.
Then he heard the roaring noise again.

The Loch Ness monster appeared from behind Dylan’s back.
 “Give me your hand, Scott”.
Dylan stretched his hand out to Scott and Dean. Everyone pulled Dylan out.
“Thank you”,  said Dylan N politely.

The monster stretched its head out and cuddled Dylan.
“Yorks!. What’s this?” 

Then the monster went silently back into the loch to its sleepy bit. And then everyone walked silently away to the minibus.

 Dylan never saw the monster for a while.

The End

by Scott B

Rooney’s goals.

Wayne Rooney is playing well for Man United. Everybody thinks Wayne Rooney is better than Messi the now, the way Rooney is playing the now.

Wayne Rooney got player of the year award. David Wear, who played with Rooney when he played with Everton and plays for Rangers now, thinks Rooney is the best player in the world the way he’s playing the now. Rooney’s been scoring a lot of goals with his head the now. For Everton he scored a lot of goals.

Ronaldo thinks Rooney is better than him the now. Ronaldo was the best player in the world last year. Well Rooney maybe is better than Ronaldo.

The end of my story. 

I watch Rooney on TV.  I don’t think anyone is better than Wayne Rooney. I don’t think there will never be better than Rooney.

by Daniel

On Sunday the 14^th of March I saw a big worm down the shore.

The worm was in the water. I didn’t know what kind of worm it was. I saw hundreds of them. They were blue and black. They swam along the water.

I stayed there for 1 hour, then they all went away. Then I cycled home and watched the Simpsons.

[It was a ragworm - ed.]

by Dylan N

One day in space there was a city called Space City with lots of UFOs and space jets.

One day in Space City the aliens were in the city going around staring at the spaceships flying about. They began to disarm places by attacking everything. The spaceships attacked the UFOs and the UFOs attacked the spaceships as well. Zap zap zap. Zap, zap, zap!

Now, when they began to attack, UFO1 landed and UFO2 landed and UFO3 landed. Why were their spaceships attacking them? After all, why was everything so difficult to bang everything into little pieces?

On Day One, the spaceships attacked the UFOs. On Day Two, the UFOs attacked the spaceships. On Day Three they all were knocked out. Zap zap zap! Bang bang Bang! The horrible noise of launching was filling the city.

Then a large shaped UFO appeared out of a building and zap zap zap. Zap zap zap launched the UFO, shooting millions of space jets. Bang bang bang, launched the spacefields. Crash, went the spacecrafts. Bang went all the stuff in the spacejets.

That morning the aliens were standing near the street lamp cheering with joy. We did it. We have won. They knew we had won.

The end

by Jonathan M

This is Jonathan M with a story about a teacher called Miss Furmage.

On Monday morning when I got to school, Miss Furmage my teacher got out of her car and said, “Hello Jonathan. How are you today?”

I said,”Fine”, and she carried on going into the school. At 9 o clock we went in from outside and hanged our coats up and all of my classmates went in to the class room and Miss Furmage said, “Good Morning. Have a seat”.
Then Miss Furmage got the register out and called pupils’ names and checking if they were at school today. And she did the dinner sheet.

Miss Furmage is a very good teacher and at maths she helps all of the people who need help. And sometimes Miss Furmage helps me. But if anybody brings in cake for the whole class, Miss Furmage said, “Don’t put them in the cupboard. Put them on my table and I might have a little nibble”.
So the person who bringed it in was a friend of mine called Tyler said to Miss Furmage., “Ok, I’ll put the cake on your table”.

Miss Furmage is a good mistake-finder on Writing and Maths and everything gels at ICT computing suite where we play our computer. Miss Furmage is a little bit generous at ICT. She lets us play games on the computer. She said, “If anybody else does not come we can have it all afternoon”.

Miss Furmage is a good teacher. If you are bad she does not take any badness off the class. If your are bad you get sent to the headteacher. But some people in my class think its a joke sometimes. Not me, because my name is “Joke” ok .

If we are good  Miss Furmage puts a star on our chart. If we get 5 stars we get to play a game like “Wink Wink Murder” or “Head Down Thumbs Up”. Everybody in my class likes our teacher Miss Furmage.

Thank you for reading.
By Jonathan m

by Spencer

The next trip it called Inchcolm Island.

For our next trip we are going to a boat and the water’s dangerous. We are going into a tunnel. Danger birds because they can bite you on the head. And the ghost is in there, in the tunnel and I screamed because they’re there.

And I like ghosts and they say BOO!

BY SPENCER

by Marc and Jonathan

On Friday 12th March it was Mrs McKay’s birthday and she brung in her baby.

Here are some photos of Mrs McKay and her baby and the children of Deanburn P3/2.

Hope you enjoy them.

NOTE: [Marc would like to say that this wasn't Mrs McKay's baby. It was another baby. Sorry! I got it wrong]

by Corey

HI  folks. My name is Corey and I come from ChatterBox City.

I have 67 eyes and 13 hearts and 54 and a half mouths. I have 1 leg and 3 hands and 13 fingers. I have a pet bear called barney…the next 5 or  6  years.

 My lion died. I was so sad I ran round in circles and started screaming and screaming and screaming…. Six minutes later, 42 villagers came outside and then they started to scream too. On and on went the screaming for 132 years. Soon everybody was elderly, people who were about 111 years old and still alive. Well, half of them anyway.

By Haris. 

We are having Mother’s Day.

1.  Buy some presents
2. Give a mum a smile
3. A Bunch of flowers.

It’s on Sunday 14^th March and sometimes people and Jesus is crucified & dead. He died on the cross. He died on the cross because he doesn’t know it was Mother’s day. His brain was close to his heart. He saw the sun. It was shining in the sky. When he woke up, he sat down for his tea. And when he went to the castle, that’s his work. He saved a princess.