Deanburn Enhanced Provision

by Scott.

On Tuesday we went to the woods.

When we were at the woods, me and Mr Antolak found a toad and the rest of the class came to see the toad. And after that we headed up to the woods and it was great even if some people were being bad.

Corey told me to go into a puddle, and he told me and Ace that it was warm. So we went in. But the water wasn’t warm. it was freezing. So I ran with my cold feet. I jumped in the mud. And it was fun, but not when it was all over your clothes. But it was still very fun.

We found sticks to make a bow and it was a fun day. I would be very sad if we didn’t get to go to the woods. I loved exploring the woods. It was great. There were lots of places in the woods to explore. Because you have got Kinneil House.

We soon headed back to school. Then we waited till it was time to go home and I went to my taxi. Then I wasnt me and told my gran and granda what I had been doing. I told my gran and granda I was in the mud and they went, “Aawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Scott. Not again”.

Then I told my mum and she said, “Aawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Scott. Not again”. Then I went home and played on my laptop. And I like playing Happy wheels on my laptop, then my ps3. Sometimes I play on my psp. After that I done my homework. Then went to bed with my laptop and played on it before I went to bed. I had fun before I went to bed but I had a sore throat because I jumped in freezing water. I took a throat sweet before I went to sleep.

I was missing Dylan on the trip because he was in my group but we kind of still had a lot of fun. But it was funny when Darren jumped into the puddle and said, “Muddy puddles!”

And I was like, “Darren stop doing that “, because it was so funny. They should have put it on the funniest moments on TV. I was so tired after all that running.

The last time we were at the woods we found a squirrel’s skull. But that’s what we reckoned it was. But at my gran’s, my little cousin was being bad. But it was kind of funny when Kenzie hit my mum’s back. After that she hit me, but I think it was still funny and she is only one year old. And she is funny, but not when she bites you, so we will have to learn her before she hurts someone and before she goes to nursery.

But it is very sad that my auntie Michelle can’t move because she is in a wheelchair, and may be in it for life. But I am glad she is still alive, because she could have died. She was in the Western Hospital. That’s all I really want to tell you about her because it is a long story. She was sent to hospital last year in Boxing day and I was really sad on Boxing day. And I heard the Western Hospital was on fire, well some of it. Lucky my auntie wasn’t in hospital when that happened. And I hope my auntie walks again because my gran and granda are very upset. That’s why they have Kenzie, my little cousin, all the time. But she goes into her own house at night time and my uncle Steven tries to get her to sleep.

But it was Dylan’s birthday today and I really hope he has a very good birthday because I had a good birthday and I hope Dylan has a good birthday. When it was my birthday I got psp and ps3 games for my birthday, like Nba2k11 Skyrim Elders Scrolls V and I got Modern Warfare 2 and I got pes 2012 for psp and the warriors smackdown vs raw 2006, I think. But I also got a cake, which I enjoyed. And the day after that it was my uncle Bobby’s birthday and I think he was 64. And then he retired from work and it was the right time to retire at his age. So all I have to say is, “Well done”.

After that it was my cousin Lees birthday and I think he was 36. And I think my little cousin’s birthday is in February 3. I maybe be wrong but my next Birthday I will be 13 years old. Oh noooooooo, I am getting older!

Anyway I like it at Mr Antolak’s. it is fun. At golden time you can bring down a friend, which is kind of cool. And maybe next year I may get the PS vita which looks cool. I think it looks cool. But also on my birthday I got a camera which is cool. I think it will be cool when I use it. And it will be just awesome.

by Spencer.

Jimmy and Patch having a good time at the park and the boys and girls having fun too.
“Time to go home”, said Jimmy.
“Let’s go to the woods”, said Patch and they went to the woods.
The Time Reporter is started to go on and then Jimmy and Patch went in. Jimmy and Patch went inside the Time Reporter and the dragons are sleeping on the ground. And Jimmy and Patch saw the fire dragon, but the fire dragon was sleeping.

The army planes try to kill the dragons but the fire dragon was saving Jimmy and Patch. But the army planes are gone. Jimmy and Patch saw a tunnel, but Jimmy and Patch were sitting down.

Jimmy and were have to go home for their dinner. And then they home had their dinner and a bath and they went to bed.

by Jay.

The super power is the car and they found the Joker.

Then they sooked him up with a big machine. Then they blasted him away in to a duck pond. Then he started crying and then he went to go home.

Then the batman found him again and blasted him into a big cave. He was scared because it was really dark. And he found a light and went into the cave. Then he saw Sawney Bean and he ran out. Sawney Bean ran after him and he was eaten up.

He was very tasty.

by Liam.

They were in bed until China was under attack. They went to help China but King Kong was there. Spirit turned into eagle form and picked up Jacup and flung him on to King Kong’s shoulder. He cut King Kong’s head off and went to the master of All Villains but he was too fast. They came up with a plan. Jacup would distract him while Spirit creeps up behind him. Spirit put him in jail but he escaped then he made chaos in the city.

They went after him but he had a big giant huge army of gorillas. Jacup Jumped over them and Spirit fly over them and killed him and lived happily ever after.

The end

by Haris.

Monday 23^rd January 2012.
Once upon a time me, Sami and Bilal were playing this ps3 game called Motorstorm Pacific Rift and can squash people and punch people of bikes. The vehicles are:
1. Bike.
2. ATV.
3. Buggy.
4. Rally car.
5. Racing truck.
6. Mudplugger.
7. Big rig.
8. Monster truck.
That’s all eight vehicles in Motorstorm.

The end.

by Liam.

Once upon a time there was a tribe of ancient Indians.  The chief had two sons named Spirit and Jacup.

When they were ten, their village was under attack. Their father took them into a tent. He told Spirit that he could turn into an eagle and Jacup could turn into the mighty wolf. They went to help the people. One of the men got into their tent and killed their mum and dad.  Spirit ran after the murderer. The murderer was too fast because he could turn into a cheetah. Jacup turned into his wolf form and Spirit jumped on his back and ran after the murderer.   Spirit turned into his eagle form and picked up the murderer and flew up to the sky and dropped the murderer. He fell from five miles off the ground and one of the king’s men saw Spirit and Jacup.  He took them to the king. The king made them his Royal Knights and they saved the city from bad people.  The king betrayed them and sent all of his men after them.  Jacup ran with Spirit on his back because they did not have full strength over their powers.

They hid in the city. In five minutes time they will have full strength over their powers. They found an old abandoned house. That’s where they would hide for the five minutes.  Then they would have full power over their strength.

Now they had full power, Jacup went after 10 guards.  One of the guards punched him 10 times right in the face.  The guard broke his knuckles.  Spirit went after the 10 guards and Spirit could punch them from miles away. Jacup and Spirit met in the abandoned house to make a plan to go after the king.  Jacup came up with a plan. Spirit could distract the guards while Jacup could creep up on the king and fling him in the dungeon and they could become kings.

So they done the plan and it worked.  They became kings.  They kept balance in the world and they lived happily ever after.

The End

(Partially scribed by Mrs Smith).

by Spencer.

Jimmy and Patch were so good today and they had some breakfast.
“Let’s go out to play”, said Patch.
“Right”, said Jimmy but Jimmy and Patch went to the woods. But the Time Reporter was still. Jimmy and Patch were going to go inside it and then they were inside.

Jimmy and Patch were inside the Time Reporter.
“There’s the dragons”, said Jimmy. But the dragons were in their dens. Patch saw the baby dragons.
“They are so cute”, said Jimmy.
But the army planes try to kill the baby dragons. But the fire dragons kept safe the baby dragons and the army planes went away. Jimmy and Patch were safe.

So Jimmy and Patch were exploring in the mountain.
“ I am the king of the world”, said Patch.
Jimmy and Patch were going down the mountain.
“The army planes are back”, said Jimmy.
The eather dragon is flying in the sky and the army planes went away.

Jimmy and Patch were going home and then they home and they went to bed.

by Dylan N.

Now that the aliens had entered earth and destroyed the SAS army base it began to turn into a big war. Some were in the sky. The SAS army squad had reached the city of San Andreas. They flew towards the airport.
“All right boys”, said Captain Frank, “we’ve reached San Andreas. We will put San Andreas into red alert. Got it?”
“Yes sir”, said the soldiers.
“We will stop the aliens there going down, but first we have to get the citizens to the SAS air raid shelter”.
Then the chopper stopped. It was into hover mode to auto level the helicopter.
“Right we have landed men”, said Captain Frank. “Pvt Jo, stay close with us. This time we don’t want to lose you”.
“Ok captain”, said Pvt Jo.
“Right boys, the SAS army truck will be here in 5 minutes”, said Captain Frank. “We’ll be here at the gate”.

Then an hour later Sgt Hardwick looked in the sky and saw something. It was shaped like a pancake.
“Sir”, said Hardwick.
“What is it my man?”
Sgt Hardwick pointed at the strange object far in the sky.
“It’s a UFO”, he said.
“ Let me look”.
He reached into his pocket to get his binoculars and looked at the object.
“Oh no”, shouted Captain Frank. “Guys we got trouble. Aliens are coming”.
“They knew we were here”, Pvt Jo shouted out to attract Captain Frank’s attention. Then the army truck came.
“Everyone get in shouted the driver.
Pvt Jo Sgt Hardwick and Sgt Endor and the others got in. captain frank sat in the front with the driver.
“Go go GO” shouted Captain Frank.
The truck sped away at high speed. Fast. Then the alien UFO followed them.
“ITS COMING AFTER US”, shouted Pvt Snedd.
Captain Frank turned round and saw it.
“Guys take out that UFO”, he said.
But while he was talking the UFO started causing chaos and aiming its laser at buildings to stop the SAS army getting away. pvt Jo started firing the rockets at the craft which didn’t even blow up.
“Huh”, shouted Pvt Jo.
He fired another rocket and hit the craft again but still it didn’t blow up.
“WHA”, shouted Pvt Jo “CAPTAIN”.
Captain Frank turned round to talk to Pvt Jo
“ What is it he said?”
“Look for yourself”.
“HUH” he said, “Why it is not destroyed?”
“Because its bullet proof”, shouted Jo again.
“Oh I forgot about that”, shouted Frank.

About 8 minutes later the SAS squad army finally made it to the San Andreas government to tell the president to put the city into red alert about the aliens.
“President”, shouted Captain Frank.
“Who are you”, shouted President Parker?
“We are the SAS army and San Andreas is in danger of an alien invasion”, shouted Captain Frank again.
“WHAT”, shouted the president?
“Look I don’t know how but these aliens destroyed our base. Now we can’t go back in to the desert because it’s totally blown to shreds. It’s like some one’s house has been blown down. But this is an alien attack”.
“Aliens! But it can’t be. Is it the end of the world?”
“No it won’t be as long as we protect our citizens”.

But then outside there was a large bang like the sound of a UFO crashing. But no this was a giant alien crash.
“Something’s out there”, said Pvt Jo. “Is it a UFO?”
“I don’t know”, said captain Frank Endor. “Sprengler, go out there and find some clues “.
“Yes sir”.
The two soldiers went out and closed the door.
“All right men we really need to stop the aliens or else they kill everyone. We have to work. Now let’s work”, shouted Captain Frank.

Mean while outside in the street, Endor and Sprengler were looking for the clues with the crashed UFO which lay crashed near the bushes.
“Right Endor scan for any sounds or clues”, said Sprengler.
Endor started doing what he was told.
SMASH.
“Endor, what as that”, shouted Sprengler?
“I do not know”, Endor said. “I’ll find out”.
SMASH CRASH.
“All right, that’s really creeping me out”, said Endor.
“We should go see what it was”, Sprengler said.
So they went round the back.
SMASH CRASH SMASH .
The sound seems to be coming from the courtyard
“We better see”, Endor said with his gun out.
Sprengler and Endor walked round and saw a crashed UFO.
“So it was that UFO that made the noise”.

Then all of a sudden the sound of a door was opening and it was coming from the UFO. Sgt Endor and Pvt Sprengler backed away and hid. Out came a tall alien. He looked to the left and looked to the right. Then the alien turned and headed for the place where Endor and Sprengler were hiding.
“Gulp!”, said Endor.
He reached into his pocket and grabbed a pistol.
“Aaaaaaah!” shouted Endor.
He shot the alien.

Meanwhile, inside the San Andreas government, captain frank was speaking to President Parkerson.
“This alien war is going on. The more long this goes the more ugly this will get”.
BANG BANG BANG .The shots from Endor’s pistol made a racket.
“SIR!” he shouted from the end of the walkie talkie.
Captain Frank picked it up.
“Hello Endor. Thank goodness. Did you find any clues”, he said?
“We did find one clue. A crashed UFO”.
“A crashed UFO. Good”.
“But worse. There was aliens inside it and now there attacking us”.
“Where are you”, said Captain Frank?
“We’re in the court yard. Come and help us. My gun is almost out of ammo”.
“Right. Sending Sgt Hardwick and Pvt Jo to help you”.

Pvt Jo and Sgt Hardwick ran to the courtyard and hid next to Endor.
“All right how do we kill them?”
“Use the rocket launcher. It will be useful”, said Ender.
So Pvt Jo picked up the rocket launcher and aimed for the UFO and aliens.
“FIRE”, shouted Ender .
BOOM BANG.
“Ohhhhhhh, man that scared me. How can a rocket that’s POWERFUL be really fast?”, shouted Sprengler getting up from the ground.

On the way back in, Pvt Jo told Captain Frank their story.
“Ender and Sprengler told us the UFO was really weak compared to the one that was chasing us”.
“Wow, seems like its power is bullet-proof”, said Captain Frank. “We’re moving to a new base so were going there now”, he said.
“You got to be joking”, said Sgt Hardwick.
“Nope”, said captain frank. The truck is just outside and it’s waiting for us so. Now let’s go”.
Everyone followed the captain to the truck parked near the kerb.
“There hasn’t been any more UFOs”, said Pvt Jo.
“I think they’re still in the sky somewhere”, said Captain Frank. “What do they want?”

Soon everyone had entered the truck. Just then president parker came rushing out.
“Mister Frank, we have put San Andreas into red alert”.
“Right”, said Captain Frank. “When those aliens come there’s going to be a big war”.
“Ok. Good bye”, shouted the president.

Then the truck drove away to the new base where the super attacking squad.
“Pvt Jo”, said Frank.
“Yes?”
“We are going to our new base but it’s not in the desert, it’s in the hills now”.
“Right”, Jo said.
Soon the SAS army made it to their new base.
“Ok men. We are now going in so president parker will put San Andreas into red alert to warn everyone that the aliens are coming. So in we go”.
Captain Frank showed the men to their new bedrooms and their new headquarters.
“All right men, we have to get to work and the president is going to put San Andreas into red alert in 5 4 3 2 1”.
DING DING DING DING.
The alarm was put in to red alert and it all was put on all over the state of San Andreas, San Fierro and Las Venturas and even Los Santos.
“Right the red alert is on everyone. Let’s get to work and find clues to aliens, where they are coming from or what they want. Now Pvt Anderson Sgt walker and Sgt Hardwick go up to the highlands and try to find some UFOs or aliens”.
“Yes sir”, they said.
“Now go”, said Captain Frank.

So they opened the door and marched down the hall way.
“Captain”, said Pvt Jo.
“What is it my boy?”
“Come here”.
Captain Jo walked towards Jo’s desk.
“What is it”, he said?
“Some things strange about that signal. It’s not working. It’s a vapour from a spaceship”.
“Try using SAS army code”, said Captain Frank.
“I can’t. Those codes seem to be blocked”, said Jo again.
“But how something or someone is trying to gain access”.

Mean while up in the highlands, Pvt Anderson and Sgt walker and Sgt Hardwick were up on the hills trying to look for clues and find a UFO.
“Hey”, said Pvt Anderson, “I think we should split-up and find something”.
“Right”, said Sgt Hardwick.
So the three men split up to search for clues. While looking round Sgt walker found a small piece of metal on the ground and there was strange writing on it.-=-=-=-=-=-[][][][][][][].
“Huh these strange. Guys, come here”.
Sgt Hardwick and Pvt Anderson ran to Sgt walker.
“What’s that you’re holding?
“Look”, said Sgt Walker giving Hardwick the metal.
BOOM BOOM ZAP ZAP ZAP.
A strange noise that boomed and zapped filled the sky. Sgt Hardwick turned round and he saw a UFO coming towards them.
“GUYS!” he shouted.
The three solders ran and ducked inside the building. And CRASH the UFO crashed with a boom. Out came tall looking men. They were aliens. Sgt Hardwick shot at the alien. And he died.

Meanwhile back at the base, Captain Frank was still trying to gain access to the blocked code. Something was messing with it.
“Hey Jo. This blocked code is not a code, it is a signal. An unidentified flying object”.
“Huh. So the signal that was messing with the monitor all along was an UFO”.
“No”.
“Yes”.
“But”.
“Yes”, said Captain Frank.” UFO means unidentified flying object, but UFO for short”.
“Huh”, said Pvt Jo. “Now that explains it”.
BLEEP BLEEP .
“Hello”, said Captain Frank picking out his phone.
“CAPTAIN”, shouted Sgt walker. “Me and the others are at a building in the highlands and were in danger”.
“What is it?”
“A UFO or aliens”
“Yip it is”.
“What?”, said Frank. “Stay in the building and try to shoot them. Over and out. Guys we’ve got trouble one of our men are trapped in the highlands. Now move up”.

So every solder followed Captain fFank. And they headed to the highlands. So 4 solders got in tanks and 6 got in choppers. And headed up the hill.
“I can’t take this anymore”, said Pvt Anderson.
“Don’t worry man. Help is one the way”.

More UFOs crashed and now it got worse.
BANG BANG BOOM CRASH.
The three men looked out and saw their army coming. The UFOs crashed and more were coming.
BANG BANG BANG BANG CRASH.
“Move up”, shouted Captain Frank from the chopper flying over the crashed UFO that lay there blank with aliens coming out the door.
“ALIENS DIE!” shouted Pvt Jo firing a minigun at the aliens.
They shot at the UFO but it was bullet proof.
BANG BANG BANG BANG BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM.
There was a massive explosion.

Meanwhile down on the ground, Sgt Hardwick and Pvt Anderson Sgt walker got up.
“Captain”, they shouted.
“What happened here?”
“The aliens came but here’s something we found. Something”.
“What’s that?” shouted Captain Frank as the chopper landed gently.
“It’s a strange piece of metal we found in the building. There seems to be strange writing on it”.
“Hand it to me”, said Captain Frank grabbing the piece of metal. “Huh”, he said. “This writing makes no sense.-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- [][][][][][][][][]. What is this?” he said. “We better go back to the base and try to see what this is”.

After the battle Captain Frank scanned the piece of metal with the strange writing on it. What did it mean? Pvt Jo went up to him and looked at it?
“That writing looks like nothing on earth”, he said.
Captain Frank scanned it again.
Sgt Hardwick spoke out and tried reading the letters.”-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-= [][][][][][][][][][][][] .Pvt Jo that writing seems to say something” he said. “Type it in on the computer”.
“Right”, Pvt Jo said.
While he began to type in the letters, Captain Frank was still scanning the piece of metal.
“ This no use”, he said. “What is this metal used for and where is it from?”
Pvt Jo typed in the unknown letters. Then he found a signal the letters were meaning. Something in alien language. Then the screen was loading up the timer to see what those letters mean. Then suddenly the screen went blank and it was turned off.
“Sir”, said Jo, “something went wrong”.
Captain Frank stopped scanning and looked at the screen.
“What is it? Did you find anything about those strange letters”, he said?
“No, it just went blank on me”.
“Huh this sounds fishy”, said Captain Frank. Ok everyone, we are up to the briefing room to out about this metal”.

Soon every SAS army solder grabbed the metal and walked carefully up stairs to the briefing room. After walking up those stairs Captain Frank told them to put it on the table in the middle of the room.
“Now we can find out why this metal is not on internet”.
After then Pvt Jo Sgt Hardwick and Sgt walker and the others had finally reached the upper floor and into the briefing room.
“Sir, we’re here”.
“Great, what took you so long?”
“Sorry. The elevator went to floor 6 and we had to walk down the stairs to get here”, they said.
“Well now we need to find and understand the truth. Why the aliens are here to destroy the world”, said Captain Frank.
“Everyone, attention. This war will start going bad the more we don’t work”.
BANG ZOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, screamed the engine sound of a UFO.
“SIR, WHAT WAS THAT?” shouted captain frank.
“Never mind sir, it was just a UFO. We shot it down said the guard from the watch tower and talking into his walkie talkie”.
“Ok then, see you soon. Right as I was saying, this alien in invasion has begun to rise. Ever since we left our base in the desert it became worse. Now men does anyone have any questions before we start?”
“I have”, said Sgt Hardwick.
“Hardwick, what is your question?”
“We now know that the aliens have fast UFOs and have destroyed our base. The truth is where are the aliens coming from?”
There was a long silence. Captain Frank put down his crayon and stared at everyone.
“What? WHAT”, shouted everyone?

To be continued.mmmmmm

by Paul.

One day we went to the woods. We had fun and we made dens and they made me their captain. The next day we went to the woods we made a bigger den. Then we made a fire.

Then the next day we went on a nature trip. We went high and low. It was really fun till I lost my hat. That was my favourite hat. I was very sad.

The next day went down to the other den. We had a mess about then we had some hot chocolate. Then we had another nature hunt. It was better than the last one. I even prayed. It was fun.

By Dean.

One day on Tuesday we had really good times going to the outdoor classroom. We saw Ace walk into big puddle. I thought he was going to get drenched. We got splitted up to find a den. We had found the best den because we had a good shelter. We found a big log at the other group. Then we had some hot chocolate and we sat on the log. I had another cup of hot chocolate and it smelled of macaroni.

We went to pack up all the stuff to go back to Deanburn. Me and Ace walked into the big puddles. We kept on walking and walking and walking till we got back to Deanburn. Some of us went to the front door to open the door. So Mr Antolak had a little talk with us. Then I went home.

Then when I got home I got a cup of tea. Then I sat at the computer and played Bloons tower defence 5.

By Haris.

Well, in the woods you do lots of things like exploring and fire lighting and we go there every Tuesday.

Last Tuesday we didn’t go to the woods because of the trees are falling of the Bo’ness Journal.

Before the Christmas Holidays in the woods I was keeping getting sticks.

When we were doing the fire lighting this man called STEVE COIL. I like him.

by Scott.

Hi everyone. I am going to tell you who I hope Rangers sign in the January transfer window.

I hope they sign Francisco Sandaza and I hope they get back Nacho Novo. And I hope they maybe come in for Kris Boyd but I hope they don’t sell Jelavic. But if they get a big offer for Jelavic then I think they will sell him. And I think Sone Aluko will become a very good Rangers player. I hope Rangers get some money in the transfer window. And I hope Ally Mcoist wins a cup this season. Also I don’t think Edu does enough work for Rangers and I think he has to start to do more work for the team.

That is the end of my real story.

by Paul.

One day a boy called Paul liked doing tricks on his bike. But one day he fell in a pot of radiation. But when he got out, he mutated into a three-headed freak. One head had sharp teeth. Another could breathe fire and the last could breathe ice and he grew enormous.

He crushed the house and the army. The general shouted, “Fire!”, but nothing worked. Paul dived into the water. Paul’s best friend Ben talked to some scientists. They made a formula but Paul must drink so Ben went to find him. But when Ben found his hideaway there was millions of eggs. And there was loads of fish. Ben got stinked off fish when the eggs started to hatch the animals were eating the fish. They looked like tiny T Rex. When Ben smelled him he smelled just like fish and when the baby T Rexes looked at one of the men it ate him. All the people ran, including Ben. They were hunted down one by one. Ben was the only one who got out alive. And then he seen Paul destroying the City Council and the army. Ben only knew one thing he could do. Mutate into a monster, but keep control. Ben ran to the factory and when he was ready he jumped into the green DNA.

Other News.
DNA Paul is going on a rampage down town destroying everything in his path. What is this? IT LOOKS LIKE ANOTHER DNA CREATURE? Ben and Paul had a massive face down. They were both brilliant fighters but Paul just got the best slip on Ben but then Ben tripped Paul up and gave him the antidote, And then Ben took the antidote. But the only problem but Paul had to pay the city’s bills. Paul looked at the bill and it said you have to owe the city 2,000 pounds and that’s only half the city.
The end.

By Spencer

I love my mummy
I love my mummy
She’s so srummary.

I like her yummy food
And I don’t like the sound of “dummy”.
I love my mummy.

by Dylan N.

Almost then, everything was all silent.
“Dylan N, wake up”, shouted a voice.
Then Dylan N got to his feet and saw a big person.
“Hello Dylan N. My name is Ivan. I am sage of six. We’re the six sages. You must be Dean’s cousin. Is that right?”
“Sure”, said Dylan N shyly.
“Come on don’t be shy. “Well any way, King Dylan N has totally destroyed the world. He destroyed all the schools in your country”.
“HE DID IT! CANT BE”, shouted Dylan N. “Where are my friends?”
“Well they were captured by the evil king”.
“He’s up to something. What could he be doing?”
“Don’t worry, Dylan N”, said Darvora the sage of Fire. “Dylan N, you must destroy King Dylan N”, said Ivan. “He must not get his hands on the triforce of Wisdom”.
“Right”, shouted Dylan N.

So then Ivan sent one of the sages to send Dylan back to his school. Then a moment later he was back. He looked around and saw an awful sight. There was Deanburn, broken and smashed.
“What happened?” said Dylan N.
He stepped in through the gate. He was shocked at the state of the school.
“KING DYLAN N”, shouted Dylan N.
Then a scaring voice coming from the rubble.
“HELLO DYLAN”, said the voice.
“KING DYLAN N, WHAT DID YOU DO TO MY COUSIN AND MY FRIENDS!” shouted Dylan N.
“THEY’RE DEAD. YOU’LL NEVER SEE THEM AGAIN. WHEN I TAKE BACK THE TRIFORCE OF WISDOM I’LL BE A REAL KING”, SHOUTED KING DYLAN N.
“Well this aint over”, shouted Dylan N. “When you die you will be nothing. AAAAAAAAAH! CURSE YOU! CURSE EVERYTHING”, shouted Dylan N.

by Scott.

On Tuesday I went to the woods with my friends and Mr Antolak.

We got packed up and went off to the woods. We got in the woods we were looking for our den. Then at last we found our den. We started to look for something to sit on so we could have rest. After that we sat down and had hot chocolate I liked it. It was very nice. Then we headed back to school. It was very windy. The trees were making a noise like whispering, like in an old myth. But we were safe.

Then we got to school. Then my taxi came and it was time to come home.

That is the end of my real story about going to the woods.

by Dylan L.

Dylan and Jack H were going to the shops to buy sweets . I, me, mum,  Jemma and Ryan.

I got Jemma and Ryan flowers and a sandy Michael Jackson suit.

I got an Xbox Call  of duty,  Black Cops.

by Darren.

On Saturday it was snowing and me and my brother started to build a igloo. So I went inside to get a square paint box. And I ran back out and back to the place where we would build the igloo and I filled the box with snow. And it made a block. And me and my bother started to build the igloo.

The igloo roof was hard to build. It kept falling in. To stop it falling in we got two nails and a hammer and hammered the nails into the wood and stood it up so it could hold the roof up. So I made some snowballs and put them on the igloo. And when I had done that I made some more snow balls and put them inside and put them on the roof from inside. Once I had done that I removed the wood from inside and me and my brother had made a igloo!

But there were a problem. There were a hole in the wall. So I made a snowball and put it on the igloo. And that was the igloo finished.

The end.
By Darren.

by Liam.

The boys were out at a disco. They heard an earthquake. They went over to the door. Liam and Jude and Jack and Ewan. An alien had ripped off the roof.

They went to grandfather’s cabin. They got swords and nunchucks. They fighted the alien. Liam cut the alien’s head off. The alien growed 18 heads and zombies appeared.

Liam had a plan. Jude did not believe him. Jude went and fighted the alien by his self. Jude almost got head ripped off. Liam and the boys made a gang and ran after the alien too. It was too fast. The gang could not keep up. The alien turned around and was breathing fire. Jude asked the bear to dance and the bear just laughed and then he grounded and attacked the alien. It fell. Jack jump in the alien’s mouth and stabbed the heart and it died.

The grandfather walked up to the alien. He ripped the wood off his walking stick and shot it with his machine gun. They gave the grandfather back his weapons. They lived happily ever after.

The End.

By Liam.

There were three brothers. One was Jude and the other was Ewan and the third one was Liam. They had a friend he was called Jak.

The boys were out and they saw a fire. They walked a bit more and they seen an alien. They went to the house to get weapons, knives and slingshots. They went to their grandfather’s cabin. Their grandfather was a ninja. He gave them numchunks and swords.

They fought the alien. They climbed up its back. Jude got caught and flung into a big brick wall. Liam climbed up to the head before he stabbed the head. The alien transported the boys and his self to the moon. They were fighting on the moon and the alien almost killed Liam, but Jude stabbed its stomach. The alien could run so fast that nobody could see it. It stopped running and Jude, Liam, Jak and Ewan pulled out its spine.

They managed to get back to Earth. They gave grandfather his weapons back and they put the slingshots and knives back.

And they lived happily ever after.

The End.
(helped by Mrs. Smith)

by Haris M

Friday 9^th December 2011  9.12.11

Hello all. You know my name is Haris and I’m going to tell you some jokes I have made.

1.What do you call a hippo doing something wrong?

A hippopotomusn’t.

2.What do you call sleeping bull?

A bulldozer.

3.What’s pirate’s favourite word?

Arrrrrrrrr.

That the all jokes that I made.Thanks for watching HARIS’S JOKEY.

by Darren.

Yesterday I got a helicopter and it cost my mum 125 pounds.

It took me ages to learn to fly it and then, when I managed to get it in the air, it was fun. It went up and down and left and right. I can stop the propeller and make it go again without it touching the ground. It is really good and really fun. I’ve crashed it a few times but I got the hang of it.

The coolers are orange and black. I call it the Wasp become it is black and orange. The plane has a charger. You just plug it in the nose of the helicopter and it charges it up.

And when it is charged up you can fly it in the air.

Then that’s all I know about my cool helicopter.

The end

by Dylan L & Jack R

Once upon a time l saw a car and I liked it so much. It was red. It was fast and the wheels was black. The car was going to a car race. There was lots of cars there so l got my car and raced it and won.

A man gave me a big cup and some money. So l went to a shop and bought a horse and rode away on it.

l went to a horse race and won it as well.

by ACE.

Aliens flew past Earth and landed on Planet 58. The aliens flew back to Earth in their wee tingling space ship. They got past the defences on Earth and were invading earth. The aliens were contolling the tanks. They were attacking the city and attacking earth.

Earth was getting destroyed by the aliens. The aliens were shooting lasers. The alien hunters got into a rocket and flew up into space to find aliens, to show the world that aliens are real. They found the aliens and they put the astronaut suit on and the astronauts got their laser guns to fight the aliens.

The mother ship was the world’s hardest alien ship to defeat. The predators attacked the alien hunters. The alien hunters couldn’t do anything about it so they ran back to the rocket and flew back to Mars to see if there’s any aliens on Mars. Then they went to all the planets. But there was one planet and that was Uranus.

The wee fat alien men were going to attack the alien hunters’ rocket, so the wee fat alien men got shoved out of the window. One little alien man wouldn’t fit through the window. They kept on pushing the little fat alien men out of the window.

The aliens went back to the mother ship to have their lunch. So the alien hunters went back to earth.

THE END.

(Partly scribed by Dean)

by Liam.

Four ghosts were out. One of them had nothing to do. He started to die. So all the ghosts have to make themselves busy or they will die.

The leader of the ghosts, she sent eighteen ghosts to fight the vampires. The ghosts won. They had a party that lasted for eighty five days and eighty five nights.

But the Queen forgot the curse and she didn’t have anything to do. She started to burn. But her son rescued her by talking to the lord of ghosts. The lord of ghosts gave her a second chance. The king was angry and he banished his son. His son swore to kill his father when he reaches 18 years old.

When he reached 18, he returned to the kingdom and sliced his father’s throat. When he got to his mother she was having a baby. He fed him and bought him lots of toys.

When he reached 4, he growed lots of strength. He reached 18 fast and his brother was about 23. They made a big army of ghosts and they went against all the vampires.

The ghosts won. But the party lasted only one day and one night.

They lived happily ever after.

The End.     (Scribed)

by Dylan L.

Once upon a time there was a dark wood on Tuesday. And we saw a ghost and we had a sword to get him down. And we got some rope and we put it on the tree and me and Ace pull it at the side and it never worked. And then we made a net for it and we put it up a tree and we pulled it off. And the guy came up the tree and he squashed me and Ace. And then he cut me and Ace’s head off.

And superman come and he opened his mouth and he went down his throat to catch me and Ace. And superman grabbed onto me and Ace. And he went up his throat and he was standing on his mouth. And he run and run and he punched his tooth out. And he escaped and he pushed his lips up. And he done it.

(Scribed).

by Scott.

On Monday my auntie’s dog died and I am a bit upset about it. And I will tell you his name. his name is Tyson. The make of the dog is a mongrel. He was a friendly dog. He was like man’s best friend. I always threw a stick for Tyson then Tyson ran after it. He was a very playful dog.

When my auntie and uncle lived at Dawson Place, Tyson got bit with Alsatian and I was very angry after that. But the day Tyson died I felt sorry for my uncle Steven because he looked upset. After that my uncle Steven gave my Auntie Michelle a cuddle. My auntie gave Tyson a kiss before he went to the vet.

Tyson used to follow my uncle Steven and me to watch us play the Playstation 2. And also watch my Uncle Steven play football manager on the computer. And Tyson used to give me a paw now and again.

That is the end of my story.

by Dylan N.

“ It’s great to be home”, said Scott, “after what happened a couple of days ago”.
“Yeah”, said Dylan. “It sure is”.

Dean came in. He was tired.
“Must find bed”, he said.
Ace was glad. He was really happy.
“Let’s watch some movies”, said Dylan.
“Yeah, let’s do this”, said Scott.
They watched a movie. It was a horror movie called The Walking Dead.
“Dean, I’ll have nightmares”, said Scott.
“Well, close your eyes”, said Dean.
Dylan watched and watched. But soon they all began to get tired.
“I am tired. Let’s go to bed. Night everyone”, said Dean.
Soon there was silence.
“Zzzzzzz”, said Dylan.

“HELLLLLLP”, shouted a voice.
“Whats going on?” said Dylan. He ran downstairs. Then saw king Dylan N’s ghost hanging Scott and tieing him up.
“YOU WILL PAY FOR WHAT YOUVE DONE. AAAAAAAAH”, he shouted.
“WAAAAAAH”, shouted Scott. He was crying.
“STOP BEING A BABY. YOURE CRAZY. YOU’RE PATHETIC AND. THE WORST BOY EVER”.
“No I’m not”, said Scott.

Just then Dylan N leaped out and threw an apple at king Dylan N.
“OW!” he screamed. Then he flew away into the sky.
“Are you all right?” said Dylan.
“Yes”, said Scott geting untied. Dean and Ace and Darren ran down.
“What was that?” said Dean.
“It was king Dylan n. His ghost”, said Dylan.
“WHAT?” shouted Ace. “It can’t be. We killed him 10 years ago”.
“He must have gained back the triforce of courage and power”, said Dean.
“But how” said Scott. “We must find him”.

So Scott and Dylan, Dean and Ace and Darren went to the Mountain of Death. That’s where king Dylan ns castle sits and watches over the sky and pacfic view. So on the way Dean and Scott and their friends found the long path that goes to the mountain.
“Oohhh no”, said Dean. “I hate this mountain”, he said puffly.

So a few hours later they made it to the summit.
“Wow”, said Ace. “That’s one big castle”. But this made it worse – because the castle walls and doors and towers were all blocked out with spikes to make the castle nice but scary.
“Now how are we going to get up there?” said Darren.
just then Dylan saw something shiny and silver.
It was a key.

Dylan picked it up.”This must be it”, he said. “King Dylan must have dropped it”.
“Lets get in”, said Dean.
Dylan turned the key and then it opened. Inside was a dark hall.
“It looks a bit dark in there”, said Scott clattering his teeth.
“Ok then”, said Dylan, “here we go”.
“NOOOOOOOOOO”, screamed Scott as they disappeared down the hall.
But soon the hall lit up. Then Ace’s head hit something hard.
“What is this?”.
Dylan touched the wall then he felt something at the bottom. It was a handle.
“This is a door!” he said.
“All right”, said Scott. “Lets go”.
The door opened up.

(To be continued)

by Scott.

Barcelona are the one of richest football clubs in the world. They have one of the best players in the world. I will tell you most of their best players names. Messi, Iniesta, Xavi, Dan, Alves, David Villa, Abidal – and that’s some of their best players.

I will tell you how Barcelona got rich. Big business men came to the club and gave them a lot of money. The name of Barcelona football clubs stadium is the Nou Comp. I like the way Barcelona play. The last time they done 22 passes and scored a goal.

I think Barcelona will win the la liga this year and I also think Barcelona will win the UEFA champions league. Barcelona may be the best team for years to come.
That is the end of my story about Barcelona by Scott

by Brad.

When I went on holiday at Seton Sands, I got to go to the beach and go to the arcade. And I bought toys and gambled games and I had to pay a pound to play. And I got to go to the park and a gigantic soft play and it was so fun! And when I was on the beach I found a star fish and a big crab.

And then I had to go home and I got to go out to play on my skateboard and scooter and bike.

by Haris.

Friday 11th November 2011.

My teacher’s name is Miss Wighton and she a little taller than Mr. Boehm.
I don’t know what her age is. Maybe she is about 39, 40, 41, 42, 43, 44, 45, 46, 47, 48.

She’s got blonde curly hair and she’s got brown eyes. She wears a skirt to school.

Dylan N.

Dylan after receiving his award from Ms Ogilvie at today’s school assembly.

Dylan had been nominated by Mrs Burton for always remaining polite and being a gentleman.

by Corey.

Hi. My name is Corey and I am 10 years old and live in Bo’ness. I was born in the Queen Mother’s Hospital and then transferred to Yorkhill in Glasgow . The day I was born I got a VP shunt in my head.

My hospital doctor was Mr. Havijassuilio . I was born around 9:30 and 9:45. I have 2 sisters and 1 brother. My sisters are called Hannah (8) and Ainsliegh (11). My brother is called Alfie and he is 3 . My dog Bailey is a staffi . My favourite team is Huddersfield Town. My favourite food is cheesey pasta. I dislike spiders and needles.

I am going to Egypt in May 2012 for 2 weeks . I go to Deanburn Primary School. My teacher is Mrs Murray. I was a presentee last year. My mum is called Michelle and my dad is called Craig. My dad has a Vauxhall Zafira and my mum has a Toyota Verso. I would have preferred a Ferrari.

by Haris.

Monday 7th November2011.

On Saturday we went to Howgate Shopping Centre. Then we went to my cousin’s house. Then we went home.

The next morning we had our breakfast. At 9:30 we got ready for Eid. After Eid me, Bilal, Sami and my dad went to the same shopping centre. We went to this shop called POUND STRETCHER and we bought 4 spicy crisps and a bottle of juice.

by Dylan N. and Dean.

We went into the castle of King Dylan N. Scott was dancing around the place and King Dylan N took Scott and put Scott in the chambers. Scott was crying. But Dean and Dylan found a key. The key was hanging of the castle and Dean jumped to get the key to free Scott. Then Dean fell to the bottom of the maze again. When he got to the bottom, Dylan shouted down and told him where to go and soon Dean got to the top of the castle. They went to defeat King Dylan N.

He was playing his organ. It had gold pipes and the name King Dylan N written in Chinese. King Dylan N was playing a horrible song of death. Dylan and Dean ran away from the castle. King Dylan N jumped from the rooftop and broke his legs from the high jump that he done. Then Dean and Dylan ran out of the castle. King Dylan N was crushed by the castle and he was killed.

Then the dragosaurus came out. It was King Dylan N. He had turned into dragosaurus. King Dylan N and Dean and Dylan got trapped in the spider web. It was a skullantula. The big hairy spider jumped off the web. Then we got put into the spider’s belly. But Dylan had a knife. Then it died.

So Dean and Dylan went to get king Dylan. When they reached the tower they saw king Dylan N playing his organ. He was playing it madly. He was going to destroyDeanburn school.
“I WILL KILL YOU. HA HA HA HA. YOU GOING DOWN . AARON”, shouted king Dylan N.
Dean and Scott and Dylan and Ace rushed in.
“You’ll not catch me, ha ha ha ha ha”, said King Dylan N. They battled him on the tower. King Dylan was firing electric balls. But Dean launched them back at him. KDN fell over and Dylan N started hitting him and then…..
“AAAAAAAAAH”, screamed King Dylan. “Noooo it can’t be. I’ve lost the power. What’s happening? I’m fading away”.
“It’s over for you now, king Dylan”, said Ace.
“NOOOOOOOOOO. AAAAAAAAAAAH .NO. NO. NO. NO .NOOOOOOOO”, screamed king Dylan N.

Then the castle got destroyed. Then Dean saw King Dylan n.
“No no no. AAAAAAAAAAAH. This is not the last time you have seen me. Everyone in the world will remember my name, king Dylan N. Aaaaaaaah”. Then he fell dead.

It was all over. So Dean and Dylan, Scott and Ace went back home.

The end

By Spencer.

Me and my friend is looking for treasure and we saw something but it was a cup.
“Where is the treasure?” said Kian.
“I think I know where it is”.
“And did you find it?” said Kian.
“Yes I did”, said me.

We opened it.
“ AAAAAAAAAAA!” said Kian.
“It is a ghost”, said me.
“Let’s run!” said Kian.

But they were gone.
“Let’s find the ghosts”, said Kian.
“Kian”, said me, “did you find any ghosts?” said me.
“No”, said Kian. “Let’s go down the street”, said Kian.
“ OK”, said me. “Do you see any?” said me.
“No”, said Kian.
“They got to be somewhere”, said me.
“Let’s check down the field”, said Kian.
“ OK”, said me.

“I saw a ghost”, said me.
“ AAAAAAAAAAAA!” said Kian.
“Be hall my fire machine”, said me.
“Lets do this”, said Kian.

We kill them.

by Ace, Dean, Darren, Scott and Dylan N.

I was getting in bed at night and it was getting really dark.

I was getting into bed and I pulled the cover right over me to keep me warm when I heard noises coming from outside. The noises were coming from this spooky house next door. I heard a bang from next door and noises like bricks falling through windows.
Well I got out of bed and looked out the window. But there was no-one there. So I went down to the door to see what was the problem. I shoved it open. And still there was no-one there.

Then I walked across the path to the old house. I shoved the old creaky door open and the whole house was pitch black. I started looking around for a light switch. And then I bumped into someone.

The lights turned on. I looked above and saw one of those Myth legends from long ago. It looked like one giant head. It had triangle eyes and a circle for a mouth. I didn’t want to look away from the head in case it came and bit my head off. I ran out quickly like a crab. I ran off to my own house and the light turned off and I saw a shadow at the window.

Then I heard someone falling down the stairs. I quickly rushed to see what it was. And below me I could see the evil King Dylan N. His deadly yellow eyes caught sight of me and he picked up two razor sharp swords. I couldn’t bear to look at him any longer so I ran into my room and locked the door tight.

The end.

by Darren.

Once upon a time there were a car and it was red. And the name was called Dino GT. Dino GT had a brother and this car was called Dino LG. And he did not get rided at all. He just stayed there in the shop until Darren came along and walked into the shop and bought Dino LG. He was fast and shiny red.

And there were a boy called Bobby Shanks.And he was playing with knives. And he scratched Dino LG and he came alive and drove to the junk yard to find Dino GT.
Dino LG said, “You’re all rusty. What happened?”
“Walter Jake done this”.
And Dino GT said, “What happened to your lovely paint work?”
Dino LG said, “I’m staying with you”.

The end.

By Scott.

There is a footballer called Barry Bannan. He plays for Aston Villa and his country Scotland.

Barry Bannan is a great young player. I will be getting Fifa 12 for Christmas for my play station 3 and I will sign him. Barry Bannon is a very talented young player and he has a bright future and career ahead of him and I like him as a player. If I was a football manager I would try and sign him. My favourite team is Rangers I wish he played for them. But he doesn’t play for Rangers.

He is fast. I am not surprised that he is in the big Scotland team. His manager is a former Rangers manager Alex McLeish. I think Aston Villa will want to finish in the top half of the table this season.

That is the end of my real story about Barry Bannan.

by Liam.

Two boys’ mums went out.  The boys went out. They phoned a babysitter. When the babysitter got here, the boys went out. The girl was going to sleep. The babysitter snuck out.

The boys were going to a party. They seen the babysitter was a vampire. The boys ran. One of them found a Mars Bar and flung it at the vampire. The boys ran to a church but the vampire ran in and almost bited them. The boys found a passage. The seen another vampire. The other vampire bited them.

They went back to the babysitter and they attacked her. But the baby sitter got the poison out. The boy and the vampire ran home. The other vampire was chasing them . But one of them picked up a cross and the vampire started to die. He ran back home for his army. They marched to the boys’ house.

 The little girl woke up from a deep sleep but the vampire had her teeth out. The little girl phoned her mum and said the babysitter was a vampire. Her mum didn’t believe her. The mum said, “Get off the phone!”.

The army came to the boys house. The leader was called Death, because he has killed many humans and vampires before. The babysitter called for her army and her army won. The boys got some of her energy and they became vampires like her.

The mum came home and they lived happily ever after.