Deanburn Enhanced Provision

by Haris

Thursday 2^nd September

My big brother is called Sami. He is 10 years old.

His favourite t.v. show is Top Gear & some other channels he likes.

His favourite cartoons is OOPS T.V  & Spongebob
Square pants and Ben10.

His favourite food is Pizza and chips.

He likes to play football.

by Haris

by Dylan L

I love Carolanne very much. She takes me to the park.

I like playing on the computer. And I like school. It’s so funny. And I love the playground so much.

When I grow up I want to be janitor. I will go up on the roof and sometimes I will check for any leaks.

I will make a new cup out of clay.

Dylan

by Dylan N

In 1900, the German bombers attacked Britain.

Dylan and the soldiers ran up the paths. Pvt Snedd was driving a tank. Private Dylan and Sgt Scott and Captain Dean stood in the tower holding rocket launchers.
BANG !

It took 15 minutes for the German bombers coming. But then a banging crash came from the sky.
“They’re coming!” shouted Pvt Scott.
Pvt Jack shouted “Dylan” from his walky talky. “Tell the Britain soldiers that the German bombers and panzers are attacking”.
“Move up”, shouted Captain Dean.
The soldiers marched over to the Germans. 400 British soldiers began shooting as the German soldiers ran towards them.
CRASH!
A crash sound came from the wall. A German panzer broke through the wall driving directly towards the soldiers. The three soldiers ducked. There was a bang. The German panzer killed the other British soldiers.

Captain Dean and Dylan and Scott cried. They buried the bodies in the sand and walked away. But the German panzer turned and drove towards them.
“Quick, run!” shouted Pvt Dylan.
They turned back into the forest and disappeared.

About 2 miles away from the beach Scott and Dean and Pvt Dylan sat down on a barrel and they heard a voice calling out of the tree. Then a guy in a green t-shirt came towards them.
“Jonathan, is that you? What has happened?”
“I’ve found someone at last”.
“What happened to your plane?”
“The soldiers were shooting at me”
“Where are the rest of the solders?”
“A panzer appeared out of nowhere and killed them. Oh dear”, said Jonathan, ” now it’s after us We have to get out of here. Jonathan has joined the team”.

Just in minutes the three soldiers grabbed their bags and ran up the path to the far end of the forest. Half an hour later it was beginning to get dark so Scott and Dylan, Dean and Jonathan sat by a tree and made a fire.
“Don’t worry guys. We will be out of here tomorrow”.Then the solders went to bed. “Good night”, said Dylan.
The light went out.

The next day a loud banging sound came from the far side of the forest. Jonathan and Dylan, Dean and Scott woke up. A German bomber had crashed. Just then, the 4 solders grabbed their bags and ran off. Almost then, Commander Jonathan and Captain Dean and Sgt Scott and Pvt Dylan settled themselves by a tree until the noise stopped.

Jonathan, Dean, Scott and Dylan were walking up the path. After about 3 miles, Dylan heard a gunshot. The 4 solders turned round and saw 2 German soldiers.
“Get them!” one shouted.
Jonathan, Dean, Scott and Dylan turned and ran. Just then, Dylan’s head hit against something hard. What was this? It was the rock of a hill, but it was a hill. The 4 soldiers got their shovels and Jonathan and Dylan and Scott and Dean dug the first bit off the hole.

Meanwhile the German soldiers saw them digging.
“Oh come on guys, dig!” shouted Jonathan, “dig, dig, dig, dig, dig”
Then there was a race. The German soldiers got some diggers. The diggers were black, both of them. Just then, when they started off the hole, it looked like this; and when they kept digging, it looked like this. Sometimes the British soldiers would gain a little faster than the Germans. Just then, Dylan knew which hill they were digging. The hill was called Mount Crumble.

By 5 o clock in the afternoon, this is what had happened to the hole. The British had dug a hole to a cave. They had dug a cave through Mount Crumble. They saw the 2 German soldiers up on the top of Mount Crumble. They were standing on the edge of the hill and looked down at Scott and Jonathan and Dean and Dylan.

“Looks like they’re trapped up on Mount Crumble”, said Scott to Dylan.
“That’s right”, said Dylan. “They’re going to be up there forever”

Jonathan and Scott Dylan dean turned away from Mt crumble.
“Come back here!” screeched the 2 German soldiers. But the 4 British soldiers didn’t listen. They were already gone into the darkness of the forest. The German soldiers were angry.

4miles away from Mount Crumble, Dean, Scott, Dylan and Jonathan were still walking. It was beginning to get dark, so they stopped and made a fire.  Then Dean cooked up some sausages. Dean ate his sausages and when they had all finished, they went to bed. Dylan got into his tent and turned the light off.

But in the middle of the night Dylan was up. He looked up at the sky and saw a star in the distance. The star was his mum looking down at him. Then he went to sleep.

But then, the next day, a loud noise came echoing over the forest. Jonathan, Scott, Dean and Dylan woke up. Then it was the sound of a tank crashing. The 4 soldiers turned and ran back to Mt Crumble. When they got back to the mountain, the two German soldiers were still there.

“Look “, shouted soldier number one, “those 4 soldiers have come back for us. Aaaaaaaah!” they screamed. The 4 soldiers turned and ran to the far side of the island. When they were 3 miles away, they saw a guy. It was Pvt Snedd.

“Jonathan and Scott, Dylan and Dean, you’re alive! The soldiers are all dead. We trapped the two German soldiers on Mt Crumble. Bet they’re bored. We need to get out of here”.
They ran to the far end of the island. As they ran, they came to end of the forest.
“Yeah”, they said. But then they heard gun shots from the forest. It was the German soldiers and the two German soldiers they trapped on Mt Crumble. The 4 British soldiers turned and ran into the building. They planted a bomb and rushed out. The building blew up in pieces and then a helicopter came for them. They got on and went home to Scotland.

And on the pier of the island, the German soldiers killed themselves because they had failed.

Meanwhile, in the helicopter, Jonathan and Dean and Scot and Dylan were glad to get home. When they were far away, the island had disappeared. Their mission was a success.  Britain had won.  “Yeeeeeeah! We have won”.

There was a buzz of laughter in the helicopter.

They were happy.

This is the end of my story.

by Cambell

I am Cambell. I am 8 years old. I like to climb trees. I like jumping on my big trampoline.

I like riding on my bike down the park. I like puting the 6 gear on my bike.

My favorite food is salmon and my favourite colour is red and my favourite song is MNM.

Cambell  (scribed by Dean)

by Haris

Tuesday 31st August 2010

After the summer holidays we go back to School.

If you starting school, you should go to school.
If you are sick, go to home play, games or do the housework.
If you don’t want to play games, watch T.V.
Or if you got homework, do it now.
Or if you got books to read, read it now.

Lunch time is very polite thing to eat food.

by Billy

In Mr Antolak’s classroom is a dress-up head.
I have dressed it up and it looked nice.
Hopefully you will enjoy it too.
This is my first blog post, it was fun making it.
Take some time to admire this.

Billy

by Spencer

I went to see the football and it called Rangers V Falkirk. It was 1-0.

And I went to see the football again and it called Rangers v St Johnstone. It was 2-1.

by Corey

There are thirty-two two teams in the world cup. England drew 1-1 against U.S.A, 0-0 against Algeria and 1-0 against Slovenia.

Then in the quarter-final, they lost 4-1 against Germany. Then Germany lost 1-0 against Spain. Then Spain beat Holland 1-0 in the final.  Xabi Lonso scored for Spain. I was pretty happy that Spain won because they are one of my favourite teams and they have really good players.

They are the best team in the world.

by Jonathan

Hello. This is Jonathan M about World War 2.

Once upon a time ago in 1939, Germany invaded Poland because Poland didn’t follow Hitler’s commands. So that’s why the Germans invaded Poland. And also Hitler hated Jews. Back in Britan there were ewo 16 year old boys and their names where Joshua and Jonathan.  Joshua used to get called Afroman and Jonathan use to get called Joke. They wanted to be soldiers and fight for their country.

The British army heard that the Nazis was going to invade Poland so they accepted Jonathan and Joshua straight away and the army sent them to Poland. Jonathan and Joshua had 2 thousand troops with them. Jonathan and Joshua and the troops got a plane to Poland and Jonathan told the polish commander that Adolf Hitler sent Germans to invade Poland. So Poland got its army ready. 2 hours later, the Germans invaded Poland and the British army was waiting for them. Then the Russian army came and waited with the British army. All a sudden, the Germans came running through the gates of Poland shooting innocent people and kidnapping the Jews.

Then the British army heard something and they ran to see what had happened and hundreds of Germans were just sitting about, so the British army started shooting at them. Finally the Germans were out of Poland so the British army went back to Britain and Jonathan and Joshua were still alive. But some of the soldiers who went with them died and some lived. Then the British army got a message from Germany that Britain was going to get bombed. So Britain got ready for them coming. Some of the British soldiers got sent to fight in Berlin, so Jonathan and Joshua went to Berlin as spies and they met Adolf Hitler. They got Adolf tied up and took him back to Britain. But it was not Adolf… it was one of his men. So Jonathan and Joshua went to Germany with troops and they invaded Germany. The soldiers parachuted into Germany and they started shooting at the Germans. But Adolf Hitler was not in Berlin. He was away on business. So we killed the Germans who were in Germany.

The end. Sorry if this true story is too short.

The end.

These are facts you should know.

1.    Do not invade or make your own army
2 .   Try not to make any war
3.    Do not kill any Jews
4    Just live and do the peace

By Joshua

Once upon a time there were two boys called Jonathan and Joshua. Sometimes people called Jonathan (Joke), but his real name is Jonathan. They were two soldiers who fought in world war two. They were on the United Kingdom side. They invaded Germany in 1939.

The war ended in 1949. By then they had invaded millions of countries. Germany bombed Britain, so Britain bombed them back.

Jonathan said to Joshua, “Lets bomb Germany, because they bombed us.”
So they bombed Germany. But as soon as they got there, Germany ran after them. So they started to run, but Jonathan said, “ If we run, we’ll never invade them”.

So they ran back and fought them. It was so simple. Germany was so weak. There was no injuries, except from the Germans.

By Dean

One day Tom & Jerry were sleeping on Christmas Eve.

Tom put a trap out for Jerry. Jerry had woken up. Jerry had put dynamite under Tom. Tom was chasing after Jerry and Jerry had jumped in his little bed in the hole and Tom’s head had got stuck in Jerry’s hole. Jerry was pushing Tom’s head out.

Then Jerry had went out to open his presents but Tom picked up Jerry and kicked Jerry out of the house.

Jerry was freezing. He couldn’t move. Jerry was covered up in snow.

Tom was thinking to get Jerry back in the house. Tom went outside, but it was freezing. He went back inside and got his scarf on and his little fluffy hat on.

Tom went outside and seen a little bump. He took the snow off and he grabbed Jerry and put the fire on. Tom and Jerry had got hot and hotter.  Tom turned the fire off and they went to bed.

The End

By Scott

Once upon a time there was a duck called Donald Duck. He was in his house making honey and toast.

Then Chip & Dale came to annoy Donald Duck. Chip & Dale made a hole on Donald Duck’s House. They stole the honey then they stole the toast. Donald Duck hit Chip on the head then they ran away with the toast and the honey.

Then Chip & Dale put the honey and the toast in the hole under the tree. Donald Duck tripped up over a tree branch. Then Chip & Dale threw a snowball at Donald Duck.
Chip & Dale laughed, “Ha, ha, ha, ha!”

Then Donald Duck ran home and realized the snow got through the chimney because Chip & Dale threw snow down the chimney. Then Donald Duck got a spade and dug the snow up so he could get a good night sleep. Then he was friends with Chip & Dale.

The end of my story.

by Dylan N

Roamer was outside in the garden watering the flowers and Bee Bot was doing house work in the truck. It was getting close to Xmas.
Bee Bot said, “Roamer, not even Utaka could steal our presents”.
“That’s just right”, shouted BeeBot. All roamers hate Utaka.
Soon the truck was clean.
“Well done, Bee Bot”, said Roamer watering one more flower.

That night Roamer and Bee Bot were putting up a party for everyone. All their friends came to the party and also his old cousin. His name was Ramer.
“Roamer”, he said, “I can’t wait till Christmas tomorrow”.

When the party was over their friends were going home.
“Goodbye”, they called out as they disappeared into the darkness.
Roamer’s cousin Ramer was scared of the dark.
“Roamer”, said Ramer, “can I stay here tonight?”
“Yes”, said Roamer.

They all went to bed.
“Good night Ramer” said Roamer and Bee Bot.
They turned out the light. The Christmas tree was only to be seen. Ramer fell asleep.

Utaka sneaked into the truck and stole presents. “Yeah!” he screamed.

The next day was Christmas. Ramer and Roamer and Bee Bot got up and went to the Christmas tree. The presents were gone! They ran outside, then to Dylano City. They ran down the road and saw doctor Dylano and Dylan the little dinosaur.
“Help us. Our presents have been stolen.. there, in that Molder mansion.”

Roamer and Bee Bot climbed into the window. They saw the Moulders and killed them and grabbed their presents and ran back to their world and opened their presents and they were happy at last.

The end

by Scott B

In world war three, Scott joined the army. He visited the troops. The troops liked him. There was captain Bob.

They were ready for world war three. So Scott teamed up with Scotland. They got in the plane. Scott said goodbye to his family. Then they flyed out to Poland. When his team got out of the plane the Russians were on the attack. Scott got shot on the leg. Scotland was in danger.

The team healed Scott’s leg and he got up. He shot a Russian. There were some bombers. Scott ran to the ship. He went inside to get his shotgun.

Scott was in a dangerous place so he had a look for one of his friends. Scott was scared. A Russian was inside the boat. He killed a Russian with his shotgun.

There was a bomber. Everyone got inside the boat and they got away from danger. But Scott got tied to a chair by a Russian. Scott got slapped on the face. When Dylan and Dean had been on a plane for three hours, they got off and saved Scott.

Then Scott shot another Russian.

Then his career was over at world war three.

That is the end of my very very real story.

by Dean W.

We had to fight Utaka. He had a sword and a axe. Me and Dylan were trying to defeat him. But Scott was trying to get a crystal sword out of the ground. It was so hard. He couldn’t get it. So Scott took over from me and I went to get the crystal sword out of the ground. It was coming up slowly. It was a cm to get it out. Then I put it in the treasure bag and I went to Dylan and Scott. I took the sword and defeated the bad Utaka.

But he came back to life. He got the army of dead people. Me, Dylan and Scott had split up. We all swirled around to kill the army of dead people. They fell apart. We got out of the castle. I put a bomb in it. Then we jumped out of the castle. It blew up. It was raining bricks.

Dylan and Scott went into a force field. Romer took us back to the future in the past. We went back to our own world. Romer saved us and I had the ruby and the sapphire and the emerald. We put the crystals into the machine but the weapons didn’t power up.

We went to the war and we put the force field on. But then we saw 4 predators. They asked me to help them against some aliens. I looked at them. They said OK and we went off to destroy the aliens: two enormous baddies. But finally we upgraded our weapons and the baddies blew up. They had stolen gold. We gave the gold back to the guy who works at the museum. Our job was finished. We had a rest and we had something to drink and eat. We travelled to our home and we went to our bed to get some comfiness in the bed. We were tired.

by Jonathan M

Hello. This is Jonathan with a story about a Scottish soldier in Afghanistan.

Once, through 2016, there was a boy called Jonathan and he wanted to join the army. So he joined the army, and it was the Scottish TA army. He was ready to face his 24 weeks of training.

Day 1 of Jonathan’s training. He had a test about what he would want to be in the Scottish army. He picked the front line. He passed his first test, but his second one was just a little bit hard because he had to build his gun which he got given by his training teacher. Jonathan passed his second test.

“Now it’s time for a nice sleep”, Jonathan said to some of his army friends. They all went to their beds at 3 in the morning. Then their training teacher came in at 5 o clock and woke them up. Jonathan said, “Only 2 hours sleep?”

His training teacher said, “If you want to be in the army in the front line you have to get up early”.

Then they went out for their morning jog. After their jog they came in for breakfast and they all had toast with butter or jam. Then after their breakfast they went to practice shooting their guns on the practice field. Jonathan picked up his rifle and started aiming at the target and he shot the target.  There was a guy who said, “Hit! If you miss the target then you put your gun down and let your partner to have a shot of shooting the rifle”.

Then after shooting the rifle we all went for a swim with heavy bags on us. And we have to swim fast, and we all did that. Then after our swim, Jonathan and the Army trainers went out crawling underneath soldiers shooting real rounds of bullets at us. We all had to keep our heads down. So we all got passed that, and at 12 we went to our beds.

Week 19. We got on to “serious stuff” like running about a field with paint ball guns shooting at each other. It was fun. it was like a free for all. Our last week there we a passing-out ceremony. Your family comes and gets your photo took with you in an army suit. But some ones family came 5 minutes late and it was Jonathan’s.  It was ok because they came just in time to get their photo taken with Jonathan.

The person Jonathan is really me in real life.

Then Jonathan went home with 1500 pound for the army training. He got 2 months off before he goes to Afghanistan. So when Jonathan found out he had 2 months off he went on holiday with his family to Egypt and it was fun.

The last day of Jonathan’s holiday. They went home and Jonathan said to his mom and dad that “The army is coming to pick me up at 8 tomorrow morning. So wake me up at 7”. And then Jonathan went to his own bed.

7 o’clock in the morning Jonathan’s mom woke him up.  Jonathan went to have his shower. At 8 o’clock the army was at Jonathan’s house and Jonathan went away. And his mom was crying and Jonathan’s dad said it would be ok. Then Jonathan got to the Scottish army base and he got his Army gear on and got his gun and he went on a helicopter to Afghanistan.

The helicopter was heading to Helmand. They landed right outside Helmand and all of the soldiers ran out the helicopter with their gun. They all ducked because they heard bullets from the east so the crouched down and started crawling though the grass with their snipers and ak47s and the ump45s.  Jonathan had a ump45 and a magnum and he was crawling though the grass. Then all a sudden a grenade came flying right next to Jonathan and Jonathan kicked it away from him and it landed in the water.

Then the soldiers met some of the Helmand village people and they were saying Taliban were destroying their houses and using them as bases to hide in. Then they got to the sandy desert and they seen Taliban up ahead of them and the Scottish soldiers lied down with their rifles and started shooting at them. They went down like chickens. Then the Scottish soldiers standed  up.

Then Jonathan and the rest of the soldiers started to make their camp up and their camp fire with water and food around it and they went to their beds. Jonathan stood up guard all night with his gun. He had an intervention with thermal sights so he could see in the dark. Also he had a heartbeat sensor so it can tell him if any enemy was getting near him. Then morning came and the night was over the soldiers got out from resting and they started a move on. Jonathan was tired and he was half awake but he was still good because he could see enemy ahead. The Scottish soldiers ran up to them and took them hostage and the Afghan soldiers would not tell us anything so we tied them to a tree with no food or water. We left them there so they can’t call back up.

Then the action really happened. The Scottish soldiers where shooting at the Taliban and the Taliban where shooting at us. We had to run zigzag so the snipers could not get us. It was life or death. We lost some soldiers and some soldiers lived. So they got past all of the bullets what was getting shot at the Scottish troops.

Then it was a day to Christmas so they set up an army base and had a Christmas party and there was hundreds of food to eat. At 12 at night the Taliban started to attack us, so we got our guns ready and put out all the lights. Then the Taliban walked in the tent and the Scottish troops started shooting  at the Taliban. They got to the end of Helmand and they got their helicopter and they all got on it. Jonathan was on the gun going home, so that means that Jonathan was shooting some Taliban who were trying to blow us down.

Then they got back to Scotland and they all got paid. And after they got paid they all went home and lived happily ever after.

The end.

It was a true story.

by Dylan N.

Tom was in his bed with his blanket to keep him warm. Tom was very happy. That day Jerry was up and he went into the kitchen and he opened the fridge to get some food. When his bag was full, he carried it back to his mouse hole. But then Tom woke up and saw Jerry.
“Hey”, shouted Tom.
“Aaaaaaaaaah!” screamed Jerry.
He turned and ran. Tom ran after Jerry. They ran into the garden. Tom’s mother was making a BBQ Jerry jumped up and grabbed some sausages. Then he jumped on Spike. He woke up. Tom grabbed Jerry and then Jerry threw a pie at Tom.

Jerry ran off. He ran back into the house. Tom ran in and he tripped on some string and broke a vase. His mother ran in.
“Tom, that was the last chance! Out you go!”
Then she locked the door.

Spike was inside the house. Tom sat outside. It was beginning to rain. He was lonely. Back in the house, Jerry and Spike saw Tom lying outside frozen. They ran outside to get Tom and they put him down on the sofa. Then Tom woke. The rain had stopped. Tom’s mother said “Sorry”.

They all went out in to the garden and turned on the BBQ and they had some sausages. And when they had finished eating, Tom ran after Jerry and Jerry ran up the climbed the highest branch. Then he stopped. He had gone too far. Tom was snarling and he leaped out for Jerry and missed. And they got more food and they ate it all.

Then Spike chased after Tom and Jerry. They ran and ran until they were puffed out. They went back into the house and turned on the TV and they watched every channel. “Click”.

It began to get dark and they all went to bed.
The end

by Scott

Inter Milan are a very good team. They are so good! They play more defensive because they are an ITALIAN football team. That is the type of football they play.

Inter Milan beat BARCELONA in the champion’s League. Inter Milan won the Italian Ieague. They are a very good team. They have a striker called SAMUEL ETTO. He is a very good player. He will play in the world cup for Cameroon. Etto shoots first time so the goalkeeper finds it hard to find his position.

I am a fan of Inter Milan

by Dylan N

Tom was having his lunch. He was always tired of catching Jerry. Every day Jerry came into the kitchen, Tom jumped down off the chair and chased after Jerry. They ran into the living room. Jerry bit Toms tail.
“AAAAAAAAAH!” screamed Tom.
Jerry laughed. Tom grabbed him. Tom opened his mouth and Jerry grabbed Tom’s whiskers and pulled it.
”Ooooooooow!” screeched Tom. Then Jerry ran off.
“There! And stay out!” said Tom.

He lied down by the fire. Jerry went back into his hole and slammed the door. He was angry. Tom was snoring. His mother sat down and turned on the telly. Jerry came out of his hole. Tom woke up and they went in the garden. It was 4 o clock. Spike was still asleep and the nice sun was still up.

Tom ran after Jerry. Round the garden they ran.
Spike woke up. “BARK BARK!” shouted spike. Tom and Jerry climbed the tree. Tom tried to get Jerry and Jerry jumped into the next tree. Spike climbed the tree to get Tom.
Yikes!
Tom climbed the branches. Tom was safe and jumped in to the next tree to grab Jerry.

Tom, Spike and Jerry stopped fighting and they sat down and had their spring time. Jerry was hungry so he went in the house and had some cheese. Tom had his dinner and they finished eating and they went back in to the garden and played.

But then they started fighting again.
“Stop fighting!” shouted Spike.
Then Spike chased them into the house and they stopped fighting and sat down and went to sleep.
“Snore, snore”, they snored.

The end

By Jonathan M

Once upon a time ago, in 1916 World War 1, there was this 15 year old boy called Jonathan M. He wanted to join the army but his mom said not in till he’s 16. But it was coming up for his 16th birthday. It was only a week away. So what did Jonathan do for those days? When Jonathan was waiting for his 16th birthday to hurry up and come, he did training for the army. He started swimming the water, then started jumping walls and had more sleep.

1 week later, it was Jonathan’s 16th birthday. Then he joined the army (and it was World War 1 still). He joined the army. He got to the army base in England and asked if he could join the army. The old man at the desk said, “Ok, because we need new soldiers to go to Berlin to help Poland”.
Then Jonathan said, “Ok, I will do that”.
And the old man said, “Get in there, soldiers!”

Jonathan walked through the gates and seen hundreds of soldiers practicing. Then Jonathan heard something from the sky. Then it got close. Closer. Then the Nazi planes came out from nowhere and started bombing England and Scotland, but they hadn’t reached Scotland yet. They were still in England. Then Jonathan jumped on a gun and started shooting at the planes before they dropped bombs on Britain. But he was too late. Bombs where getting dropped from the sky and Jonathan and soldiers were shooting on these big guns. They were shooting at the planes and then the planes came down from the sky and then blood came from the plane. It was a blue sky before they came and turned it black with smoke and flames. Then all the planes were down.

The commander came up to Jonathan and said, “Nice shooting, boy. It looks like you don’t need training”.

Then Jonathan went on the boat with hundreds of soldiers. They went to Berlin. Then they got there in 2 hours. When they got off it was quiet. 2 quiet. Then the Nazis jumped out and said, “Put your hands up”, in German language.
And Jonathan said, “What did you say?” Then the British soldiers started shooting at the Nazis. Then the rest started shooting at them. Then all the Nazis who were at that bit died. The Polish army jumped out and said, “Thank you”.

Then we teamed up with the Polish army though Berlin. They split up and half of soldiers went left and half of them went right. Jonathan and 20 soldiers went forward. Jonathan knew 1 of the soldiers out of the 20. One was his brother David. They walked beside each other and watched left and right. Then all a sudden Germany’s army jumped out in front of the 20 people (and Jonathan it was 21) and there were about 50 or 60 German soldiers around them.

Then Jonathan threw a flash bang and it blinded them for about 20 mins. Jonathan and the 20 soldiers shot at the Germans and they kept 1 Nazi alive to take Jonathan and the rest of the soldiers to Hitler. But that German soldier said, “No, I’m not taking you to Hitler. Then Jonathan put a gun to his head and he said, “Ok I’ll take you to Hitler”. The German told him where the house was.

Then all the soldiers started walking together again. Then they seen the house. There were hundreds of German soldiers guarding the door. Jonathan hopped into a tank and started driving to the house. And Jonathan shot a tank bullet and it blowed half of the house to pieces. It killed Hitler, then all the Jews were free.

Then Jonathan got back to Britain, and he was a hero.

The End