Deanburn Enhanced Provision

by Dylan N

Dr Dylano has just been ordering his stuff with nothing in his hands. After all, why was he being chased by Molders?

When King Dylan N came out from the bush, he walked on the street and waited for the Molders to come. Dylan the little dinosaur was already on the building itself. He jumped down and landed on a Molder’s car.
“Yrks!” yelled Dr Dylano from the little house. “I don’t know why these Molders are trying not to shoot through people’s necks and bones”.
“Yrks!” shouted Dylan the little dinosaur.

King Dylan N slumped between the Molders’ cars and opened the door and accidentally made the alarm go on.
“Oops! I didn’t know Molders’ cars had alarms on them!”

Dylan N slumped down to the boot and grabbed a bag of money and took it over to the Country Club where Dr Dylano and the little dinosaur were.

When it got dark that night, Dr Dylano and Dylan the little dinosaur and King Dylan slumped down to the beach where the harbour was. There was suddenly a gunshot down by the Country Club gate. A Molder walked in. Then the sound of a Molder came from down by the path and crashed into Dr Dylano’s barricade.
“No! “ shouted Dr Dylano. “That’s my barricade. What a thing to do to a guy’s barricade!”, shouted Dr Dylano.

Then King Dylan N jumped out from behind a bush and threw an apple at a Molder’s car.
“What was that?” yelled one.

King Dylan N turned his eyes yellow and walked out from behind the bush. He jumped over to the Molder and grabbed the Molder’s car and was going, “BANG BANG BANG, BANG, BANG! CRASH. When the Molder’s car came to a damaged halt, it came on fire. King Dylan N turned and ran.
Bang! went the car. Then they all got out from the bush.

And then a strange thing happened. A large darkness came from behind Dr Dylano and he was sucked into the darkness.

“Oh no!” cried Dylan the little dinosaur and Dylan N.
Then starfighter Dylan came out from behind a bush and he stumbled out into the darkness. King Dylan and Dylan the little dinosaur said, “Where’s Dr Dylano?”

But he was sucked into the darkness by the Molders..
They glared at each other

To be continued.

by Ace

It’s fun in here and Mr Antolak’s nice.

You can draw pictures in here and you can tell stories. And there’s a worry box that you can put your name in if you are worried and bullied.

And you can make puzzles and when you’re not finished your Maths you can finish it in Mr Antolak’s classroom.

You can do lots of work if you do want to do your work in Mr Antolak’s class.

That’s it.

by Marc

Hello, my name is Marc. I am going to tell you about school.

My favourite class is Maths. I like school because you get to see your friends. The Trim Track is fun. It has Monkey bars, tyre swings, climbing frames, a tunnel. My favourite is the Monkey bars.

I like coming down to Enhanced Provision. I like getting help to get a better Education. I like when there is play time and lunch time because you get to go outside to play.

I am going to Bo’ness Academy in June.

by Daniel

It was my own idea. And I made it at home. It was from all my pieces of lego from my box at home. And I done it all myself.

I bring it into school all the time. Loads of people like it. And I make other cars and jeeps and lorries. It’s a rally truck. I make big jeeps as well. I’ve made a big fork lift truck as well.

I’ve wtitten to Legoland and I got a reply. I’m good at building models. I’ve got about £3000 worth of lego. I’ve got four big boxes of lego at home.

by Dylan N

Dr Dylano is getting closer to the Molders. King Dylan and Dylan the little dinosaur are still clearing out the Molders that are attacking in the city. Dr Dylano was getting chased again by the Molders.

Dr Dylano ran back to the hiding spot where he was hiding by the Country Club bush. When King Dylan N and Dylan the little dinosaur arrived, Dylan ran into the Country Club gate and he noticed that the little bit at the hiding bush was open.  He ran down and grabbed some wooden branches and barricaded the path. And he said: “There. That will show them!”

King Dylan N and Dylan the little dinosaur ran through the bush to the other hiding spot. The Molders drove very fast down the little path between the two bushes and crashed into the barricade and didn’t go down. Dr Dylano sat on the palm tree at the top by the bush. “Yes. I knew they wouldn’t get through my barricade”, he thought.

When the Molders got out, they ran round the barricade and started shooting at Dylan. Dylan the little dinosaur hid behind a bush and then tiptoed round by the side of a Molder’s ear and then roared, “Yaaaarh!”.  The Molders screamed “ARRRRH! Then King Dylan N said “Ha ha ha ha. What a bunch of girls they are!” Then Dr Dylano laughed as well.

The Molders got back into their car and then went after Dr Dylano. He slipped between another Molder’s car and ran behind him. He could hear them shooting. Dr Dylano got past some taxis and wouldn’t get in. King Dylan and Dylan the little dinosaur followed the Molders down the road. Then Dylan threw a stone. “Ahhhh” screamed a Molder.

Dr Dylano scrambled his way down the path. Then Dr Dylan N came to a large traffic. He was trapped, and all the other Molders began to run him down. Dr Dylan climbed over the railing and slipped into the water. King Dylano launched at the Molder’s car and the cars exploded.

“Victory” yelped Dr Dylan getting out of the water with Dylan the little dinosaur. And King Dylan went home. After all they would take out all the Molders that are taking over Dylano City . After all, Dylan N would have his revenge back.

by Marc

 I am from Scotland. I am from Bo’ness. I am going to go to Bo’ness Academy. I am in Enhanced Provision. I like it because you get more help.

I am interested in cars: Aston Martin, Porche, Ferrari. And I play golf. I like all about racing cars and how they make them. And I’m interested in how they can’t get to the bottom of the sea. I like fun, playing outside, playing games.

I drew a cool car. It’s red and it’s a rocket car.

by Jonathan M

This is Jonathan M with a story about Deanburn Primary in WW2.

Once upon a time ago in Scotland, Bo’ness there was a war school called Deanburn Primary School. And in that school there was a little boy called Jonathan and his friends Darren, Jay, Dylan and Marc.

One day Jonathan said, “I am going to join the army”.
His friends said, “You are not going alone. We are joining, too”.
So the time they were 15 they all joined the army.

The next day, the army van came to pick them up to take them to France, Normandy Beach. Jonathan and Darren, Jay and the rest were all in a boat before they knew it with AK47 pistols, snipers, a bomb launcher and the rest of the guns. Then the boat stopped and the door opened and they ran out of the boat. The Nazis where shooting.

Of all of the soldiers, Darren and Jonathan were the first ones to the bunker’s doors to get in. Then Marc and Jay and Dylan got though the doors. They got the gun out of their back and they sneaked up behind the Germans when they where shooting at our soldiers. Jonathan got one of them and. Marc and Jay were in the different bunker what was on the different side. They shot at the Nazis.Then all the soldiers looked up and seen no guns shooting. Then they seen Jonathan and Jay and Marc and Darren and Dylan standing in the bunkers.

Then they carried on their journey. Jonathan and the rest got to the woods and set camp up and they had sausages and soup and through the night Jonathan could not sleep.

Suddenly Jonathan heard a noise, then Jay woke up. But Darren, Marc and Dylan were still asleep. Then Jonathan and Jay grabbed their guns and it was a ambush. Jonathan and Jay stood back-to-back shooting at them. Luckily the rest of the soldiers woke up and came out shooting their guns at the Nazis. Jonathan and Jay lived thanks to the lazy sleepers what they woke up.

In the morning Jonathan and the rest got a move on through the woods and nearly got killed. There were bombs about the ground so a helicopter got us. But suddenly, we got to the bit where we were going to. Then the helicopter got shot down, but Jonathan and Jay and Marc and Darren and Dylan lived in the crash. The rest of the soldiers died. So it was only us 5 to get through this war ourselves.

Jonathan and Jay said, “Lets get a move on”, so they carried on through France woods. Finally Jonathan and the rest found the Germany house what was there and they got desks to get in the house. Then they got to the top of the roof and planted a bomb and jumped into a Nazi car and drived away from the house. It exploded in flames and smoke and screaming and they chucked off the Nazi uniforms and they got to the back-up of the British.

We got to them at 10 o clock at night and met them there. So Jonathan and the new soldiers and Jay and the rest got a move on. The British soldier said, “You all look like 15 or something”.
Jonathan said, “We are fifteen”.
“We are going to destroy the Nazi house up ahead”.
“We already done that”, Jonathan said.
“Really?” said the British soldiers.
“Sure”
“We will wait to see it. Come on lads, let’s go to the house then, to see”.
When they got there, Jonathan said, “ I told you I did”.

Then all of the soldiers got to the last place in France to get the Nazis. But Jonathan was not well. But he still did it. When they got there to the battlefield they got a helicopter and they dropped a big bomb on it. 2 weeks later they got back to Scotland. When they all landed, everybody was shouting, Heroes! Heroes!”

Jonathan got home that night and seen his girl friend. It was Jonathan’s 16th birthday and he got back from the war. Jonathan and Jay and Darren and Marc and Dylan all lived happily every after.

The End.

By Dylan N

Dylano City has come back to another attack.

Now the Molders have gone onto the streets and are shooting everywhere. Now Dr Dylano has to run all over Dylano City streets and roads to find a hiding spot.

That day, King Dylan N and Dylan the little dinosaur were attacking the Molders. They both headed straight to the Country Club. Dr Dylano and Dylan N and the little dinosaur came from behind a large green bush. The Molders speeded across the bridge and into the bush. Why had no-one in Dylano city told them that the Molders were attacking the city? After all, they would know how to stop them. But last time Dr Dylano sneaked behind the car and planted a bomb and then it had blown up. Now another group of Molders are attacking the City.

On day one the Molders attacked Dr Dylano and King Dylan. And on day 2, the Molders attacked King Dylan and Dylan the little dinosaur. And now the Molders attacked them both. Shoot, shoot, shoot. Crash! One Molder’s car crashed into a wall with smoke coming out of it and Dr Dylano was knocked onto the Country Club roof and he was hanging from it. King Dylan then fainted.

The only car that was still fixed was the other black car. Dylan the little dinosaur and Dylan N jumped out at them. The Molders’ car was soon on fire. The car reversed backwards into the bush. Now the car blew up. Then a voice came out above King Dylan and the little dinosaur: “Help”, screamed Dr Dylano hanging from the roof.

King Dylan helped him down. Then Clunck. Smash. Crash. Splash! The Molders had knew they had fallen into the water when the fire truck came. They sprayed out the fire and drove away.

“The good end to a good day”, said King Dylan and Dylan the little dinosaur, “Playing tennis at the country club”.

The Molders were sent back to the mansion in disgrace. Dr Dylan N safe at last! After all, even the other Molders would be attacking in the city.

After all, tomorrow was another day. The end.

by Jonathan M

Once upon a time ago in 1442, there was a man called Jonathan who made the first talking computer.

It took 1 day to make. The Queen told him to make it or you will lose your head. So Jonathan ran out to his house and started to make it.

Then he had a knock on the door. He opened it. It was the Queen. “I will give you one billion pounds if you make it today”. So Jonathan said ok. Then the Queen went away and Jonathan got back to work building it.

In the morning it was finished. Then the Queen came and said, “Where is my computer?”
“Here. Where is my money?”
“Well, here you little street rat. Here is your money”
But it was just fruit.

Then the Queen left the house carrying the computer. When the Queen plugged it in the wall it said, “Hello Elizabeth. How are you today?”
She said, “Fine. How are you?”
The computer said, “Fine.”
The Queen said, “Do you want to marry me?”
The computer said yes.

Two weeks later, they got married. It was cool. They had a big cake, but the computer did not have any. 8 years later the Queen died so the computer was a king. The computer gave all the poor people money and food. He was called King Sweetable. He was the best king ever. He made a cinema, a shop and a bar for people who drink juice.

But one day he got old and he died. So his son Tommy was king forever. He was just like his dad.

That is the end of my story.

By Jonathan m

by Dylan N

Up in space there were aliens on Mars and they had special flying machines called UFOs.

They usually went down on the Purple Planet to invade that place. One UFO landed and UFO 2 landed as well. But then the UFO crashed along the Purple River and it had fire coming out of it.

And then a large noise was coming out of the UFO’s entrance. The bottom of it was opened. The aliens came out and headed for a small town on the Purple Planet. When they reached it, the people ran screaming. The aliens began attacking in the buildings.

Then out of the corner, a long arm reached out of the door and whacked the alien over the head. Crash! The alien landed on the ground. The other aliens ran away. Then the people attacked the aliens. They dragged the alien back to the UFO and all the aliens in the UFO flew off to another world.

When they reached the other world, they began attacking the other world as well. The aliens stared at the people running with their black eyes and then the people got weapons and began shooting at the aliens. The aliens screamed and ran.

They got in the UPO and flew back to Mars. They knew they could’t stop the people.

The End.

By Dylan N

by Spencer

Hi my name is Spencer.

I like football. I like Scotland v Brazil. It was a draw:  Scotland 1 Brazil 1…

Scotland got a goal first. Brazil got a goal second. It was a draw. It’s in Glasgow. Scotland is the best of the day. Scott Brown got a yellow card and the next day it was half-time. Now they go back to the pitch and now they play football.

I like football the best of the day. I’ve got football shoes, football socks, football t-shirts. I play football at home with Richard at my childminder, Mary. I like her. She is nice to me.

And we’ve got 90 minutes till the football’s finished. They have a referee.

By Spencer.

by Scott

His team came from Scotland and they had to verse Japan. Japan were bad people.

One of Scott’s men got killed. Scott B was shouting, “Help. Help!” Then he cried, “Ahhhhhh!. He’s dead”.

Someone from Japan tried to kill Scott but Scott ran away. Then Scott B got shot. “Aahhhh! I’ve been shot”. They got Scott a plaster. His team, called Scotland, were worried he died. But he did not.

One of Scott’s men were killed. He was crying. Scott got his gun. He just missed someone from Japan. Someone from Japan tried to shoot Scott but just missed. Scott got a fright. One of Scott B’s men got their guns but some of Scott’s men got killed. The Scott’s team.

Scotland and Japan went to Paris to fight in France. Scott’s men got killed. Then Scott got killed.
My mum was sad.
She cried, “Aahhh, Scott. Come back!  Robert, your son is dead”.

Later on Sunday it was Scott’s funeral. His gran was sad.

They put flowers down for Scott.

The end

by Jonathan

This is Jonathan with World War 2 in Japan.

Once upon a time ago in 1930, all of the British army and the Americans went on sea in a big boat called MP400 where all the planes landed on.

But one day the Japanese came to bomb it so all of the soldiers (including combat Jonathan when the Japanese  bombed) were on big guns on the boat shouting: “The Japanese! Get down”.

Jonathan was a little bit scared but he thought of his family and he started shouting, “Get the planes down!”  But then the boat sunk.
Jonathan got on a mini boat and got away from the Japanese. But Jonathan’s brothers died.

Jonathan was very angry watching the boat sink. In the morning Jonathan and his friend Laba got a move on through the woods.  But Jonathan knew there was something going fishy.  Then a Japanese soldier ran up and tried to kill him by stabbing him but Laba shot the Japanese soldier in the foot and said, “Where is the way to the bunkers?”
The Japanese soldier said, “Shut up. I’m not telling you”, so Laba shot him in the other foot.

Then they set up camp, but Jonathan heard a noise coming from outside and he looked and it was more British soldiers. He said, “How did you get past the bombs I planted at the two doors?”
“We parachuted in here. OK?”.
“OK”, Jonathan said, “Lets get a move on tonight”.
“OK” said Jonathan’s friend Scott.

We got to the bunkers at 10 o clock.  The Japanese were asleep so Jonathan’s army  went to ambush them by tying them up and putting them in the water. We got to the battlefield and we were walking through it. Then we heard something shouting “Banzai!  Kill them all now!”

Then we got surrounded with the Japanese and Jonathan chucked  a smoke granade in front of them and we got to the end of the Japanese.

When we got home, Jonathan and Laba and Scott got to the army base. But Jonathan was feeling sick. 8 day later, Jonathan died.

On the Sunday it was Jonathan’s funeral with the rest of the soldiers who died. Their family was at Jonathan’s grave. Jonathan’s family and kids were crying.

The end.

This is a real story. Jonathan’s family were very sad for the rest of their life

I hope you enjoyed my story . Bye.

By Dean and Corey.

When I was seven, for my birthday I got a phone and a DSI, pajamas, clothes and I got a wii game called Super Mario Brothers and a watch and some Xbox360  and a guinea pig and a Viking birthday cake, some DVDs and some Ben 10 action figures. And I got £210 and I got 16 selections boxes and I got a pot out of clay.

Hi my name is Dean. I got some Wii remotes. I made a cup out of a clay. Dylan does like singing all the time. I got Christmas with the Simpsons.

My dad has got a DVD called Armageddon.

Me and Dylan went to a party last week. It was very good to eat the cake. It was a strawberry cake.

By Haris.

Friday 5^th March 2010

Today is my cousin’s birthday. Her name is Seka. Her age is 11 & she is going to be 12.

She is got a big brother. His name is Safian Sawkhut & their mum. They have a great party and it’s a big day. My brother says it’s a big day and she says, “Yes. It’s a big day”.

There’s going to be a drink, food, chicken, rice, pasta, chips, fish and ice cream and a cake. We are going to say,
“Happy birthday to you,
Happy birthday to you
Happy birthday to Seka.
Happy birthday to you”.

She lives in Grangemouth, near Falkirk.