World War One.

February 26, 2010

By Jonathan M Hello this is Jonathan M with a good story. Once upon a time ago there was a little boy called Jonathan who was born in 1900. But when he was growing up it was world war 1. So when he was 5 year old the Germans bombed the whole of his country […]


Spencer’s Island

February 25, 2010

by Spencer Hi my name Spencer. I went to island 22nd February 2010. It was having shells at the seaside and we had our lunch at the island and it got cold. We bringed a packed lunch for lunch. It was good at the island but it had walks and badgers and broken glass…that’s vandalism. […]


Scott’s Island

February 25, 2010

by Scott At the start of my trip to Cramond I went on the bus to get there. Then I went to see the waterfall. There was money in the waterfall. Then I seen ducks in the river. Then me and Dylan and Dean went to the beach. I looked for crabs before I went […]


The Terrible Giant

February 25, 2010

by Joshua One day there was a terrible giant. I had heard about it in the newspapers. “I’ve gotta stop this giant”! I muttered softly to myself. So I put on my rescue clothes and got to work. I shortly approached a sign that said BEWARE GIANT! I carried on….. “GIANT!” I shouted. There it […]


Our Trip to Cramond Island

February 24, 2010

By Dean Hello, it is Dean. We went to Cramond Island and it was so sunny there. It was the best trip ever! We saw the waterfalls and there was money in the waterfall.  Daniel and Declan ran away from Mr Antolak and Mrs Rose. Then Mr Antolak ran to get them and Mr Antolak […]


Declan’s Island

February 24, 2010

by Declan The island was big and I went in the mud. Daniel got stuck in the mud and my feet got wet in the water. We were walking along the path and I was running along the side and me and Daniel found two crabs. And we started to run to the island and […]


Things I Like

February 24, 2010

by Corey Hello everyone, my name is Corey. I am a sudent at Deanburn Primary school. I am 8 years old from Bo’ness. I have two sisters called Ainsley and Hannah. I sometimes watch a show called Hollyoaks. I always watch the Krypton Factor on Tuesday. I have a mum and dad called Michelle and […]


Our Trip

February 23, 2010

by  Jonathan M This  is Jonathan M with a story about my trip Yesterday me, Declan, Dylan, Daniel, Billy, Spencer, Scott, Haris, Dean, Corey and Ace all went  on a trip to Cramond. And before we got there we went in a mini bus to get there. When we got to the beach it was […]


Trip to Cramond Island

February 23, 2010

By Dylan N We went on a trip to Cramond island . We got on the bus and we went off. When we got off, we walked down past the river to the beach. When we got to the beach we played in the sand for a little while, then we got our bags and […]


Cramond

February 23, 2010

by Daniel We went to Cramond Island and went in the bunkers and played on the beach as well. Then we went to Hopetoun house and we spent all our money there and I got a torch and a chocolate cake. And I got stuck in the mud at Cramond beach. Then we went back […]


Bird of Prey

February 19, 2010

by Declan This bird of prey is a big bird and it eats mice and other things. It has big wings and has black stripes. It has big black eyes and is about a foot long. It has black feathers at the back and it has big claws. I copied this picture from a book. […]


The Two Dylans

February 19, 2010

by Dylan N Once upon a time there were two doodles. One was called King Dylan and the other one was called Meta Dylan. One day they both played on Inchcolm Island. They climbed up the hill and went in the tunnel. When they got to the other end, a large group of seagulls were […]


The Accident

February 19, 2010

by  Scott One day I fell off my bike. When I fell I had a bleeding finger. It was sore. After that I got a plaster. My granda told my gran off at my house, –     You shouldn’t take Scott down the hill. –      Ok. I will not. After that we watched TV. After that they had […]


William Wallace

February 19, 2010

by Jonathan M. This is Jonathan M with a very sad, and happy, story. Once upon a time ago in Scotland there was a young boy called William Wallace whose dad died against the English. When at his dad’s funeral, William noticed he will fight the English. William Wallace went down to the bottom of […]


Cramond Island

February 18, 2010

(Picture of Cramond Island by Spencer J.) by Spencer & Haris On next Monday 22nd February 2010 we are going to Cramond Island for our trip. We are walking to the Island and there’s a beach. Then we are going to walk back at the afternoon. When we go to Cramond I will like the Beach.The […]


Out Fishing

February 18, 2010

by Joshua One day Joshua and Scott went on a trip to the beach. Scott pointed out a crab, but I was to busy out trying to fish……. Aha!!! I caught an anchovy. So we went home at last, sat down, put the anchovy in the fridge for a couple of hours, and cut it […]