Space City
by Dylan N
One day in space there was a city called Space City with lots of UFOs and space jets.
One day in Space City the aliens were in the city going around staring at the spaceships flying about. They began to disarm places by attacking everything. The spaceships attacked the UFOs and the UFOs attacked the spaceships as well. Zap zap zap. Zap, zap, zap!
Now, when they began to attack, UFO1 landed and UFO2 landed and UFO3 landed. Why were their spaceships attacking them? After all, why was everything so difficult to bang everything into little pieces?
On Day One, the spaceships attacked the UFOs. On Day Two, the UFOs attacked the spaceships. On Day Three they all were knocked out. Zap zap zap! Bang bang Bang! The horrible noise of launching was filling the city.
Then a large shaped UFO appeared out of a building and zap zap zap. Zap zap zap launched the UFO, shooting millions of space jets. Bang bang bang, launched the spacefields. Crash, went the spacecrafts. Bang went all the stuff in the spacejets.
That morning the aliens were standing near the street lamp cheering with joy. We did it. We have won. They knew we had won.
The end
March 14th, 2010 at 8:02 pm
Dylan i liked your story well done keep up the good work
March 14th, 2010 at 8:03 pm
Dylan i liked your story well done
March 17th, 2010 at 11:33 am
Dylan
Your drawings are so good, you are very talented. I bet this one took you ages!
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Mrs Kilburn
March 25th, 2010 at 11:02 am
great pic dylan it is colourful i love space city
March 25th, 2010 at 11:03 am
great story dylan i liked your picher good work