Deanburn Enhanced Provision

by Dylan N

Dylan went to Loch Ness on the trip to see the loch. When he was standing near the loch he heard a roaring noise. When he turned round and saw the Loch Ness monster he couldn’t believe his eyes. “Yorks”, he said.

Scott and Dean ran towards Dylan. What is it?” said Dean     
“Look!” whispered Dylan pointing at the head popping out of the water. They ran back to there group.When they ran back to the group they spoke to Mr Antolak.
“Mr Antolak! Dylan saw the monster out in the loch”, said Scott.

They ran back to the standing bit. Mr Antolak followed.
”That’s funny. It was right here a minute ago after we walked away”.

They walked over to the side of the loch and walked down the path to find it. On the way, Daniel zoomed past Mr Antolak and started pushing Dylan.
 “Don’t push me “, said Dylan.
Daniel began to attack Dylan. He was like a dragon stamping on a person.
“Aaaw!” said Dylan. “Mr Antolak! Daniel stood on my foot!”
“Don’t be rude”, said Mr Antolak.

When Dylan kept walking, he heard the loud roaring sound again. Scott and Dean followed Dylan to the loch. Dylan ran down the path to near the edge of the loch and found the perfect spot. Daniel ran down the path and jumped by Dylan’s space. Daniel pushed him. Dylan was throwing some bread into the water to feed the ducks. Daniel pushed Dylan out of his space. Daniel pushed him again. Dylan pushed him back: “Don’t push me!”

Daniel wobbled. Dylan wobbled. Splash! Dylan tumbled into Loch Ness. Crash! Daniel tumbled into Loch Ness.
Mr Antolak helped Daniel out..
“Help” screamed Dylan N in the water.
Then he heard the roaring noise again.

The Loch Ness monster appeared from behind Dylan’s back.
 “Give me your hand, Scott”.
Dylan stretched his hand out to Scott and Dean. Everyone pulled Dylan out.
“Thank you”,  said Dylan N politely.

The monster stretched its head out and cuddled Dylan.
“Yorks!. What’s this?” 

Then the monster went silently back into the loch to its sleepy bit. And then everyone walked silently away to the minibus.

 Dylan never saw the monster for a while.

The End

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