Deanburn Enhanced Provision

by Jonathan M

Hello this is Jonathan m with a story about WW3. This is made up.

Once upon a time ago in 2015 there was a boy called Jonathan who joined the British army. Jonathan was 16 years old. His mum said, ”Don’t join the army. You will die in Afghanistan”.
Jonathan said, “No I’m not going to die”.

So Jonathan went in the boat going to Afghanistan. It took 1 day to get to Afghanistan. Jonathan was a little bit scared in the boat about what his mum said. Then he got out and meet the another soldiers who got the helicopter on the sand. Jonathan’s commander said, “We need to get past that wall”.
Jonathan said, “ I have a idea”.

Jonathan’s idea was to shoot the tank at the wall so the afghan soldiers will come out. Then the British will shoot at them when they got out the big wall gate. Jonathan’s commander said, “That is a good idea”.

His commander’s name was commander David M. That was Jonathan’s brother who joined 4 years ago. Jonathan and David always helped each other if one of us got injured. We will stick beside each other in till the medical came.

Then commander David said, Get the tank ready to shoot at the wall”. Then Marc was in the tank. He shot the tank bullet and Darren said, “Fire the bullet!” and Marc fired it at the wall. The Afghan soldiers got out of  the brick gate and ran out and we shot at them. Marc shot a tank bullet at them but they where running out very fast. But the Afghan soldiers all died. Then commander David said, “Lets go in”. Jonathan ran in first, then Marc and Darren brung in the tank. Then commander David came in with the rest of the soldiers.

Jonathan and David was walking down the path and they got ambushed. If Marc and Darren was not there we would have been killed.  Jonathan, Marc and Darren were new in the British army but Jonathan stayed next to David.

Then Jonathan seen water. David says, “Don’t drink it. It has been poisoned”, because David seen the green bits inside. Then Jonathan and David and the rest of the soldiers ran down the path shooting round the corners and we killed about 8 hundred Afghan soldiers. And Jonathan seen a tank coming and Marc and Darren were shooting at it and they missed so all of the soldiers hid but Jonathan. David grabbed a bazooka and shot at it and it blowed up so the soldiers went down to the tank with Jonathan and David.

The British soldiers checked if any soldiers were alive. Jonathan seen a bit of movement so Jonathan went to see and found a baby in front of a fire. Her parents died so Jonathan put her in beside Adam the plane driver. Adam took her back to Britain.

Then Jonathan and David got a move on. They got out of the village and in to the sandy forest. Then Jonathan said to David, “Something is fishy,” and David said that too. Then they heard a noise coming from up the trees and he seen the British parachuters and some of them got shot down. Jonathan and David seen the Afghan soldiers running up shooting. Then the British tank came down and blowed up the Afghan soldiers up who were running up to them.  Jonathan said, “We are lucky”. David said, “Yes we are lucky our tank came up and saved us or we would of been dog meat”.

Then Jonathan and David and the soldiers got out of the forest and got to the water where the boats were and they got on the boats and got back to Britain alive.

Jonathan and David’s mum was not sad because we were not dead. Jonathan and David was in the newspaper the time they got back. It was 2016. The day –  Tuesday 15 march 2016. It took a year to get through Afghanistan.

That is the end of my story. Thank you for reading.

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