The Palace of Dylan N.
by Dylan N
On a hill there was a palace called Tamara Palace.
One day king Dylan N was sitting on his throne eating biscuits. He had lots of Dylano Morlocks. They all were protecting the palace. King Dylan hated intruders. When they broke into his main bit he just always kicked them and punched them. In the night King Dylan N was watching over his balcony to look for a secret cave.
Back in the palace, all the Morlocks and King Dylan N were at the table eating food and drinking stuff. King Dylan began to burp. BURP And then he said “Pardon me”.
After dinner, King Dylan and all the Dylano Morlocks went to bed. When all the lights were turned off there was silence. It was very dark. Then suddenly up in the sky a thundering roar of lightning struck through the clouds. The Dylano Morlocks and King Dylan N stumbled out into the darkness of the thundering roar of lightning. King Dylan N stared at the lightning. King Dylan N and the Morlocks ran back into the palace and barricaded the door.
When a man came out of in front of the lightning and into the palace. King Dylan jumped out from the door. “Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarh!” roared Dylan.
“Waaaaaaaaaaa!” said the man. He ran back into the lightning. And the thunder died down and the sun shone.
“Hurray!” shouted all the Dylano Morlocks and King Dylan N.
Back in the palace, King Dylan N and the Dylano Morlocks were sitting at the table eating food and drinking blackcurrant and water. They knew they would be living always in the palace for ever.
The End.
March 23rd, 2010 at 10:17 am
Well done Dylan! I like some of the WOW vocabulary you used in this story like ‘intruders’ and ‘barricaded’ and ‘thundering’. You created a frightening atmosphere in your story very well but I’m glad it has a happy ending and everyone is safe in the end.